Family Ties Volume two.
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "How To Tame A Man."Second book Of Series.
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Comment from Maria Millsaps
Was this poem written by a child?
That's really good. Anyway I have a few suggestions:
"I don't know what I did...to be (have) such an impact in your life."
"I said to she (her)...."
You are not obligated to take my recommendations.
I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Was this poem written by a child?
That's really good. Anyway I have a few suggestions:
"I don't know what I did...to be (have) such an impact in your life."
"I said to she (her)...."
You are not obligated to take my recommendations.
I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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HELLO MARIA: A person actually made the statement the way that I wrote it. So I wrote it the way that they said it. But your way is correct. I should have written: "I said to, her," not, "she." You are correct again. Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the true feeling and emotion about her, she may not know what she did, but the effect and reactions are evident affected you in time, but you recognise her, for you know to err is human; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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This speaks the true feeling and emotion about her, she may not know what she did, but the effect and reactions are evident affected you in time, but you recognise her, for you know to err is human; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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HELLO ALCREATOR: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. God bless you Cordially: ronnie69.
