Poetic Treasures and Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Within My Solitude"A book on nature and feelings and spirituality.
6 total reviews
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Donna -
Great job on this monorhyme, especially with not so easy words to rhyme with in the mix. I think you did a splendid job!
We're on the final stretch for NaPoWriMo now!! Keep it going! :)
Kim
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Hi Donna -
Great job on this monorhyme, especially with not so easy words to rhyme with in the mix. I think you did a splendid job!
We're on the final stretch for NaPoWriMo now!! Keep it going! :)
Kim
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Dear Kim, Thank you for your comments and review. Will my NaPoWriMo poems, even though they're not other contest entries, be considered? Also, can I create a book today and add what I have already written for NaPoWriMo entries? Donna
Comment from kiwijenny
I love this mono-rhyme solitude, gratitude,, multitude, fortitude, attitude, beatitude, plenitude, certitude...amazing
I love solitude..it helps me think,
God bless
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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I love this mono-rhyme solitude, gratitude,, multitude, fortitude, attitude, beatitude, plenitude, certitude...amazing
I love solitude..it helps me think,
God bless
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Dear kiwijenny, Thanks for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You have been there? How amazing, your poem has great ending rhymes and it is inventive and different, what a wonderful pilgrimage, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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You have been there? How amazing, your poem has great ending rhymes and it is inventive and different, what a wonderful pilgrimage, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna x
Comment from frogbook
Great use of the monorhyme here with all of these similar wordings. Very inventive and original this becomes a unique way to talk about how hard you are trying. Great write.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Great use of the monorhyme here with all of these similar wordings. Very inventive and original this becomes a unique way to talk about how hard you are trying. Great write.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Dear frogbook, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from tfawcus
Usually, I find mono-rhyme poems a bit forced, but this one works quite well. Reflections in solitude refresh the soul and often bring a new sense of purpose and direction.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Usually, I find mono-rhyme poems a bit forced, but this one works quite well. Reflections in solitude refresh the soul and often bring a new sense of purpose and direction.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Dear tfawcus, Thank you for thinking that my monorhyme works well. Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from moongirlwriter
This is beautifully written with all the "tudes". It's interesting to see how we can create such a lovely poem with playfulness. "And the hills ARE alive". This photo absolutely proves it. :)
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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This is beautifully written with all the "tudes". It's interesting to see how we can create such a lovely poem with playfulness. "And the hills ARE alive". This photo absolutely proves it. :)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Dear moongirlwriter, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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Dear moongirlwriter, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove