Life of a Nun
A contest entry26 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sad poem about a woman who has known nothing else but a nunnery and this was a sad fact for many women years ago, glad this does not happen to women today, a fine write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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This is a sad poem about a woman who has known nothing else but a nunnery and this was a sad fact for many women years ago, glad this does not happen to women today, a fine write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your very empathetic review of LIFE OF A NUN, Dolly.i truly
Comment from persevere
I am moved by this poem.Here is a girl committed to a life that was chosen for her. Your verses on the emotions felt, as she watched the young lovers , are tenderly told.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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I am moved by this poem.Here is a girl committed to a life that was chosen for her. Your verses on the emotions felt, as she watched the young lovers , are tenderly told.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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I truly appreciate the empathy expressed for Sister Claire, and many thanks for the kind praise of my poem.
Comment from QC Poet
Starts out well, then focuses on sins of the flesh, I don't doubt nuns have those thoughts but I Believe and hope they focus on their Love of service to God. Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Starts out well, then focuses on sins of the flesh, I don't doubt nuns have those thoughts but I Believe and hope they focus on their Love of service to God. Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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I think Sister Claire is obedient and serves the Lord willingly. But she is also human and realizes what she has missed out on?simple romance. One wonders if she was ever kissed by a boy her age. Many thanks for sharing my poem.
Comment from moongirlwriter
I never have thought about the yens of nuns. . .I think I always thought they had made their choice of loving Jesus and only Jesus and they were happy. I must confess though, the grass is not greener on the other side. There are many in sheep's clothing that makes this scene, precious in every woman's eyes. . .but never realized by them. There aren't enough loving men in the world or enough men understanding how to love in the world. Wonder what that's all about? Beautifully written, but a little sad.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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I never have thought about the yens of nuns. . .I think I always thought they had made their choice of loving Jesus and only Jesus and they were happy. I must confess though, the grass is not greener on the other side. There are many in sheep's clothing that makes this scene, precious in every woman's eyes. . .but never realized by them. There aren't enough loving men in the world or enough men understanding how to love in the world. Wonder what that's all about? Beautifully written, but a little sad.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Yes, sad for women like a Sister Claire who had the decision made for them by a father. Thank you for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt and sad poem. Many girls were sent to the nunnery for many years when the parents were unable to take care of the girls. They miss out on many adventures in their lives.
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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A very well-written heartfelt and sad poem. Many girls were sent to the nunnery for many years when the parents were unable to take care of the girls. They miss out on many adventures in their lives.
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Yes. I am not sure if that is as common today. Thank you for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- a great depiction of a situation of isolation ... one accepted by the young lady with her obedience well-demonstrated... I've often wondered what it is, beyond the vow of obedience, keeps a cloistered nun in her position especially as you say here she can view other lives outside her window... beautifully done and a very unique contest offering! :) Best of luck at the polls! :)
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Wow -- a great depiction of a situation of isolation ... one accepted by the young lady with her obedience well-demonstrated... I've often wondered what it is, beyond the vow of obedience, keeps a cloistered nun in her position especially as you say here she can view other lives outside her window... beautifully done and a very unique contest offering! :) Best of luck at the polls! :)
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind response to my poem. I truly appreciate your empathy for Sister Claire and your kind praise.
