Love of Animals
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "The Match"Eclectic mix
10 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
AAAAWWWW fight like cats and dogs. lol Wouldn't it be great is that is how we humans fought? Excellently done nonet and a great piece for the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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AAAAWWWW fight like cats and dogs. lol Wouldn't it be great is that is how we humans fought? Excellently done nonet and a great piece for the contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank for your positive review, glad you enjoyed the Nonet
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun Nonet. It is great fun to see our pets play-fight during the day, they are mostly playing until one of them get accidentally hurt then the one goes in hiding while the other acts like the winner. Lol.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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A very well-written fun Nonet. It is great fun to see our pets play-fight during the day, they are mostly playing until one of them get accidentally hurt then the one goes in hiding while the other acts like the winner. Lol.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Pets are fun to watch. Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Good question. It's all in the personal interpretation, isn't it? My guess is that it is a little of both, playing and fighting. Nice nonet. A wonderful moving picture. As a cat person, I am rooting for the orange tabby. This is fun, enjoyable to read and view, and philosophical, as well. Well done.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Good question. It's all in the personal interpretation, isn't it? My guess is that it is a little of both, playing and fighting. Nice nonet. A wonderful moving picture. As a cat person, I am rooting for the orange tabby. This is fun, enjoyable to read and view, and philosophical, as well. Well done.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Yes, it proves that animals of different species can get along,.i have seen countless videos of endearing relationships thought impossible. In the old ?nature or nurture? debate I think environmental plays a big part. I really appreciate your kind review, Jesse
Hugs, Trisha
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Ah, yes! "Nature or Nurture?" I think most "experts" agree, that environment is greatly involved, more than thought possible.
Jesse
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There are many cute videos, but I can?t transfer to FS
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I haven't a clue how to transfer videos to FS. I have a hard enough time with still photos or artwork.
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They have made it much harder now. This video of ?Match? was one I saved last year, before they changed it
Comment from damommy
I think they're playing and having a good time. You did an excellent job of keeping the triangular shape, which is very hard to do. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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I think they're playing and having a good time. You did an excellent job of keeping the triangular shape, which is very hard to do. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind review. Nonet is actually one of my favorite
styles of poetry.
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
I'm pretty sure it's a mixture of both in what some call dominant play... lol! ;) :) Loved your poem, Trisha, but I gotta point out that you have a reverse nonet (don't know if there's a proper word for that...?), and the contest calls for a nonet with the nine syllables first. :) :) I like yours better, but I'm worried about the rules committee... :) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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I'm pretty sure it's a mixture of both in what some call dominant play... lol! ;) :) Loved your poem, Trisha, but I gotta point out that you have a reverse nonet (don't know if there's a proper word for that...?), and the contest calls for a nonet with the nine syllables first. :) :) I like yours better, but I'm worried about the rules committee... :) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Gotcha! Thanks, I didn?t read the rules, I just thought Nonet - I can do that! Would you like half my $8+ winnings from my 3rd place win for my other poem? LOL
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Cybertron1986
Very cute and spot-on observation of the nature of pets. It makes the reader wonder, and this is what good pieces should achieve. I like how you emphasized "In different ways" in the middle. Not sure if you consciously did this, but I felt it was a perfect place in your piece to achieve emphasis of your message here. Beautiful
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Very cute and spot-on observation of the nature of pets. It makes the reader wonder, and this is what good pieces should achieve. I like how you emphasized "In different ways" in the middle. Not sure if you consciously did this, but I felt it was a perfect place in your piece to achieve emphasis of your message here. Beautiful
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much for your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Heather Knight
Your poem is so funny and it's made me think of my own cat and dog. I'm never sure if they are playing or fighting. At least now they tolerate each other. At first it was terrible.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Your poem is so funny and it's made me think of my own cat and dog. I'm never sure if they are playing or fighting. At least now they tolerate each other. At first it was terrible.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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I?m so glad you enjoyed the Nonet poem. I had that picture saved for months to pair it with a poem. Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fine nonet Trisha and such fun are these animals when they play fight like this as if in a boxing ring, your nonet flows perfectly, best of luck with it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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This is a fine nonet Trisha and such fun are these animals when they play fight like this as if in a boxing ring, your nonet flows perfectly, best of luck with it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you Dolly, I enjoy Nonet style. I appreciated your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from rspoet
Hello Bucketlist,
This is an excellent Nonet poem and entry for the contest,
but I count eight syllables in the last line.
Otherwise, the interaction between the cat and dog
seems like playful fun in this descriptive Nonet.
Well done
Good luck in the conetst
Robert
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Hello Bucketlist,
This is an excellent Nonet poem and entry for the contest,
but I count eight syllables in the last line.
Otherwise, the interaction between the cat and dog
seems like playful fun in this descriptive Nonet.
Well done
Good luck in the conetst
Robert
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Well, Robert I count 9 syllables! That?s because I added one more syllable, thanks to you. I appreciated your kind review, and help. I have no nominations left to award.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from zlp22
Great poem and picture. Good word flow and short and sweet. Good luck in the contest. That type of poem is not easy to write. Love poems about animials.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Great poem and picture. Good word flow and short and sweet. Good luck in the contest. That type of poem is not easy to write. Love poems about animials.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your complimentary review
I?m glad you enjoyed the poem
Hugs, Trisha
