NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "What Do You Really Want From Me?"National Poetry Writing Month
6 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your use of the Triolet to convey these strong emotions. Your rhymes and the reinforcing artwork were very effective. Keep enjoying your time away- Joan
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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I admired your use of the Triolet to convey these strong emotions. Your rhymes and the reinforcing artwork were very effective. Keep enjoying your time away- Joan
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Hi Alicia,
Is that a Lynx? He really does have a look on his face that appears to say, "What do you really want from me?" :) I'll take the tea. You can keep the cat. He looks like he could be fierce.
This is a very well executed Triolet poem.
Hugs,
Connie
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Hi Alicia,
Is that a Lynx? He really does have a look on his face that appears to say, "What do you really want from me?" :) I'll take the tea. You can keep the cat. He looks like he could be fierce.
This is a very well executed Triolet poem.
Hugs,
Connie
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Yes, a lynx from fanartreview. Thank you :)
Comment from l.raven
Hi Alicia, I don't think I would want anything from this little kitty...LOL...I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture...very nicely written my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Hi Alicia, I don't think I would want anything from this little kitty...LOL...I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture...very nicely written my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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You're very kind. Thank you :)
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your always so welcome Alicia...smiling back at you...lovw xxoo
Comment from BeasPeas
Well, this kitty (looks like a cat of some kind) does have that look on its face--"what do you want from me?" Animals can be humorous. Your Triolet asks the right question from this exasperated cat. Marilyn
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Well, this kitty (looks like a cat of some kind) does have that look on its face--"what do you want from me?" Animals can be humorous. Your Triolet asks the right question from this exasperated cat. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I'll take a cup of tea. I enjoyed your triolet, Sunnilicious. Good job with its style. Your repeated lines fit in smoothly and your rhymes are good. I like your little story. I like how it starts and ends with the same question. Good job and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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I'll take a cup of tea. I enjoyed your triolet, Sunnilicious. Good job with its style. Your repeated lines fit in smoothly and your rhymes are good. I like your little story. I like how it starts and ends with the same question. Good job and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. I think that type of cat is a caracal? I think you've perfectly captured/captioned exactly what he/she was saying with your poem, Alicia! Well done triolet!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Lol. I think that type of cat is a caracal? I think you've perfectly captured/captioned exactly what he/she was saying with your poem, Alicia! Well done triolet!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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I just liked the cat picture. Thank you :)