Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Love your rhyming acrostic, JoAnn! My favorite lines were:
"Yawning blossom lit within,
Finest gossamer outer skin,"

Spelling question:
"prescious gem," (precious?)

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019

I did note that afterword but I thanks u so much-going in for the correction.

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Good one, Joanne. I never thought of jelly fish in rthose terms before. But they certainly make sense. It is a fine acrostic and should do well in rhe competition. Bless you, Bob

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019

Thanks so much, Bob.

reply by Mastery on 24-Apr-2019

Got your check, Joanne. Books going out Friday. Let me know when you get them will you? Bob.

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019

Ok-thanks much. Let me know if any issues with the check-should be taken care of but there was a huge fraudulent check on my account for "fuel dispensers!" I was freaking out but they said the check should not be an issue, just my debit card.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That was really well done, Joanne. Acrostics are hard to do and get them to rhyme nicely, but you have achieved it perfectly. I wrote about jellyfish for a children's story, and I learnt a lot about them. They are incredible. That one in your picture really does look like an angel's twin. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019

Thanks so much-I bet that made a wonderful children's book!