Comment from JudyE

Excellent

You've used some really descriptive words here to describe jellyfish. To create an acrostic while also rhyming, and to make it all sound effortless, is a real accomplishment. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-May-2019

Really appreciate you reading.

Comment from James W. Reynolds

Excellent

This is a nice acrostic poem with a smooth rhythm. Typically, I find acrostic poems rather clunky, but this flows evenly. The word choice is strong and creates a vivid image.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019

Thanks much for reading and your kind comments.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

As much as I enjoyed the artwork you choose to go with your wonderful write Which was a perfect match.. That was the only thing I dread to encounter in the water those light weight to me, dangerous jelly fish
thank you for sharing
Cookie

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019

Thanks much, my friend-yes, nice to look at-no good to touch.

reply by misscookie on 25-Apr-2019

Amen!
your very welcome
Cookie

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written acrostic poem about the jellyfish everyone is talking about that lives in the ocean, very few people has seen them but fore sure everyone knows about them.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019

I have seen them upclose in aquariums and they are just fascinating and indescribably beautiful. Thanks so much for reading.

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Hi JoAnn,

Nature is amazing, and this picture is so beautiful! Your Acrostic poem does it justice. "Effervescent, Luminescent," ... that really captures what we're seeing here. Love your use of the word "gossamer" here too.

This is a lovely entry for the contest! Best wishes!

Hugs,
Connie

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019

Thanks so much for your kind review.

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

You certainly can learn a lot about jellyfish from your contest entry. Great job!

My favorite lines are E, first L, Y, and H. Good use of the vocabulary to describe this fish LOL

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019

Thanks much -I appreciate your reading and attention to detail.

Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

A graceful ballerina with a nasty sting! There are dozens of beautiful jellyfish in the oceans and I think it's a good subject for an Acrostic. I wish you well, Thanks for sharing a colorful poem.
Heads up - precious not prescious
Hugs, Trusha
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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019

Thanks so much for that!. I knew it looked wrong but by gosh if I could see why!

reply by Bucketlist on 24-Apr-2019

That happens to me as well!

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello!
Jellyfish are indeed, amazing! You have chosen excellent adjectives to describe your subject-matter! Direct, keen, to the point. Wonderful visual offering!

thank you!
diane

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019

Thanks so much, Mrs. KT

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a great acrostic, frogbook. I love the rhyme--an added bonus. Your words are descriptive and create great imagery. Your picture choice is a great pairing with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019

Thanks so much for your wonderful review.

Comment from dovemarie

Excellent

Dear frogbook, You must have seen a jellyfish up close. I liked the coloring of your words, and the rhyme, also the adjectives. Good luck in the contest! Dove

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019

I love these things and I have seen them. Thanks so much for reading!

reply by dovemarie on 24-Apr-2019

Dear frogbook, You're welcome. Dove