If I Could Rime
I am not Purfect contest entry9 total reviews
Comment from WryWriter
I had to read this more than once...not for that reason...because it is so funny! I love it! The photograph is perfect for this theme. Hmm...that about sews it up...with a sem.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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I had to read this more than once...not for that reason...because it is so funny! I love it! The photograph is perfect for this theme. Hmm...that about sews it up...with a sem.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Wry W. I was just in one of those moods. Ha. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Beri Bee
I love your use of spelling
and funny words of telling
Shirley we have met
'cause I sometimes live here to!
LOL! Well done!
And in the interest of using enough characters, I smiled broadly and chuckled faintly! Thank you for the joy!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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I love your use of spelling
and funny words of telling
Shirley we have met
'cause I sometimes live here to!
LOL! Well done!
And in the interest of using enough characters, I smiled broadly and chuckled faintly! Thank you for the joy!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Beri. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you had a little chuckle at this silliness. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
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I voted for my own poem, and after I read yours I asked FS if I could change my vote. They said No. If I could have, you would have tied for first! Sorry about that! Next time I will read them all before I vote!
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No biggie, B. If I would have tied for first I would have gotten less fake money, having to split the winnings. Second place was just fine. Lol. Always vote for your own piece. You never know how the voting will go and it would be a shame to lose out on a win because you didn't vote for yourself. Have a great day, Beri. Thank you again.
Ron
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Thanks Ron!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun poem. I will not correct your imperfect spelling or your grammar, because I am not perfect too. I often make mistakes that many see as a crime.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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A very well-written fun poem. I will not correct your imperfect spelling or your grammar, because I am not perfect too. I often make mistakes that many see as a crime.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Lol, yes we all do. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Sandra. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Ron
Comment from Sugarray77
You are so clever to use this approach to this prompt. I am still chuckling over the made up words you have slyly inserted. Such fun!! Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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You are so clever to use this approach to this prompt. I am still chuckling over the made up words you have slyly inserted. Such fun!! Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Wow, thank you so much for the great review and the big sixer, Melissa. I surely didn't plan on seeing one of those. Lol. I thought of this silly idea and just ran with it. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Thank you again. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from moongirlwriter
You made me smile, your writing made me chuckle. . . I can so relate. What a fun piece to read and enjoy. I wrote something as well but haven't finished it. . .I do know it ends in, God made me perfect, who am I to argue? :) Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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You made me smile, your writing made me chuckle. . . I can so relate. What a fun piece to read and enjoy. I wrote something as well but haven't finished it. . .I do know it ends in, God made me perfect, who am I to argue? :) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the great review, MGW. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. Have a wonderful day. Yes, we're all perfect in His eyes.
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Comment from humpwhistle
Yeah, I get it. But I got tired of getting it.
When you have one joke, make the most of it, then say 'Goodnight.'
Sorry, but this is a one joke poem stretched far beyond its limits.
But what do I know?
Let the voters decide.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Yeah, I get it. But I got tired of getting it.
When you have one joke, make the most of it, then say 'Goodnight.'
Sorry, but this is a one joke poem stretched far beyond its limits.
But what do I know?
Let the voters decide.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Yeah, I wore it out, I know. Lol. Looks like the voters agree. Ha. Thanks for the stars, Lee.
Comment from LisaMay
I used to equate intelligence with good spelling and knowledge of how to use our mother tongue properly, but you have wised me up to the fact that misuse and parody are very intelligent, clever abuses of the language. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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I used to equate intelligence with good spelling and knowledge of how to use our mother tongue properly, but you have wised me up to the fact that misuse and parody are very intelligent, clever abuses of the language. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Lisa. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a wonderful day.
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Congratchulashuns on the purfect speling in yor repleye.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this made me smile, none of us are perfect and we all make mistakes and I try and embrace them and learn from them all! But you get your five stars and lots of luck with this poem, I am still laughing, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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He he he, this made me smile, none of us are perfect and we all make mistakes and I try and embrace them and learn from them all! But you get your five stars and lots of luck with this poem, I am still laughing, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Dolly. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great day.
Comment from LyndaS
Two funy!! Luv the pickshure. This iz verie cleaver, poet. Yes, yur riming sux. But it werks hear. I witch u gud luk in this context. Yur gonna knead it. Well dun!! Larry.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Two funy!! Luv the pickshure. This iz verie cleaver, poet. Yes, yur riming sux. But it werks hear. I witch u gud luk in this context. Yur gonna knead it. Well dun!! Larry.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Hahaha. Thank you for the great review, Larry. I really appreciate the generous stars and humorous review. I needed a chuckle. Have a great night. Thank you again.
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Any thyme.
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Haha
