Strawberry Shortcake
5-7-5 Suite on Favorite Dessert4 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Congrats on First Place!! :) ;) ;) This has always been up at the top of my favorite desserts that's not much work but oh-so-delicious!!! ;) ;) This was a wonderful and mouth-watering entry for the contest, June -- so glad you joined us in our pursuit of poetry yumminess! ;) ;) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Congrats on First Place!! :) ;) ;) This has always been up at the top of my favorite desserts that's not much work but oh-so-delicious!!! ;) ;) This was a wonderful and mouth-watering entry for the contest, June -- so glad you joined us in our pursuit of poetry yumminess! ;) ;) Yvette :)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your kind comments- it was a fun challenge. Looking forward to summer strawberries!
Comment from LisaMay
Licking the bowl... I remember that! The best treat, we took it in turns when we were kids. Loved this poem. Love strawberry shortcake and whipped cream.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Licking the bowl... I remember that! The best treat, we took it in turns when we were kids. Loved this poem. Love strawberry shortcake and whipped cream.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thank you for sharing your sentiments on my piece on strawberry shortcake!
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I am still licking my lips!
Comment from RodG
What a delightful way to share a favorite memory--and dessert--with your readers. I can easily visualize all three of you concocting this strawberry shortcake and then devouring every crumb. All three rhymes were very well chosen. Rod
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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What a delightful way to share a favorite memory--and dessert--with your readers. I can easily visualize all three of you concocting this strawberry shortcake and then devouring every crumb. All three rhymes were very well chosen. Rod
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thank you for sharing your sentiments on my piece on strawberry shortcake!
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My pleasure. Rod
Comment from Pam (respa)
-That is a really
tempting dessert that
jumps off the screen!
-Nice presentation, too.
-The syllable count and
rhyme are good.
-The imagery is vivid,
and the alliteration in
the beginning is effective.
-You bring back memories
of my grandmother baking
biscuits and making
strawberry shortcake!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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-That is a really
tempting dessert that
jumps off the screen!
-Nice presentation, too.
-The syllable count and
rhyme are good.
-The imagery is vivid,
and the alliteration in
the beginning is effective.
-You bring back memories
of my grandmother baking
biscuits and making
strawberry shortcake!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thank you for sharing your sentiments on my piece on strawberry shortcake!
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You are very welcome, and you got my vote!
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You are quite welcome. I still get hungry thinking about it!
