The Gray Wolf
But for such devotion among our own...12 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
You know I love the nonet and this one if wonderful! The form looks so pretty, my favorite choice for the nonet and double nonet. The wolf picture and them is unique and fresh. We can learn a lot from the devotion of the Timber Wolf.
All my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
You know I love the nonet and this one if wonderful! The form looks so pretty, my favorite choice for the nonet and double nonet. The wolf picture and them is unique and fresh. We can learn a lot from the devotion of the Timber Wolf.
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thanx for dropping in on this one... although i see you (and Jackson's!) shining face a few times here.... can't wait to read!! ;) ;) So glad to here from you! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful image and
nice presentation.
-Notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
and the description of the
Grey Wolf is excellent.
-It flows well from
line to line, and you
show the importance
of their family.
-A strong contender; good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
-Beautiful image and
nice presentation.
-Notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
and the description of the
Grey Wolf is excellent.
-It flows well from
line to line, and you
show the importance
of their family.
-A strong contender; good luck!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from victor 66
Wolves are one of my favorite wild animals. They travel quiet and for the most part unseen. They only take or kill what they need. They also add to the balance of nature. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
Wolves are one of my favorite wild animals. They travel quiet and for the most part unseen. They only take or kill what they need. They also add to the balance of nature. Best wishes.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
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You're welcome.
Comment from jlsavell
Author, I happen to think wolves are beautiful creatures. I had a good friend who domesticated two wolves..though I am not certain whether they were gray.. This is a wonderful post dedicated to these animals.. thank you for sharing and best wishes with the contest....
jlsavell
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
Author, I happen to think wolves are beautiful creatures. I had a good friend who domesticated two wolves..though I am not certain whether they were gray.. This is a wonderful post dedicated to these animals.. thank you for sharing and best wishes with the contest....
jlsavell
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
Such a great picture of the wolves together and I like your black background along with text color to go with their fur! I appreciate the details below to teach us about the wolves. The poem was well done and formed. One minor thing, I think you meant to put an "i" instead of ' in the word family. Good luck in contest!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
Such a great picture of the wolves together and I like your black background along with text color to go with their fur! I appreciate the details below to teach us about the wolves. The poem was well done and formed. One minor thing, I think you meant to put an "i" instead of ' in the word family. Good luck in contest!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from LisaMay
Thank you for your poem which presents the survival instinct of the wolf pack family very well. "allied and organized' is a great phrase. All the information below was very instructive too. Thanks for including.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
Thank you for your poem which presents the survival instinct of the wolf pack family very well. "allied and organized' is a great phrase. All the information below was very instructive too. Thanks for including.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonetheless about the gray wolf who always be part of a family unit they live and hunt in packs, they seem to care for one another as well.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
A very well-written Nonetheless about the gray wolf who always be part of a family unit they live and hunt in packs, they seem to care for one another as well.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Sandra. :)
Comment from 24chas
I liked this read. I would assume the term lone wolf is not a gray wolf. It's amazing how they have such a strong family unit and a community. It's a good lesson for us humans to learn from. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
I liked this read. I would assume the term lone wolf is not a gray wolf. It's amazing how they have such a strong family unit and a community. It's a good lesson for us humans to learn from. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Chas. ;)
Comment from June Sargent
Wolves deserve our respect and protection. And the grey wolf in particular is a majestic creature. Leadership and loyalty are qualities we as humans could emulate. Thanks for sharing this lovely piece.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
Wolves deserve our respect and protection. And the grey wolf in particular is a majestic creature. Leadership and loyalty are qualities we as humans could emulate. Thanks for sharing this lovely piece.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine nonet and wolves have many human-like traits and you have described their behaviour well here in your perfectly formed nonet, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
A fine nonet and wolves have many human-like traits and you have described their behaviour well here in your perfectly formed nonet, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. ;)