His Work is Never Done
An Animal Nonet Entry7 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Such a colorful illustration matched with your writing prompt verse
Great description of that little horse and his parents.
Do like your last two lines as an ending/beginning!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Such a colorful illustration matched with your writing prompt verse
Great description of that little horse and his parents.
Do like your last two lines as an ending/beginning!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for your positive feedback, Mark.
Comment from Sandra Leon-Gonzalez
Beautiful Nonet Animal piece. Isn't great the way species in nature plays pivotal roles to insure survival. Even though this is such a short piece you captured the essence of the family dynamics of the seahorse in a wonderful way. Great utilization of the right picture. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Beautiful Nonet Animal piece. Isn't great the way species in nature plays pivotal roles to insure survival. Even though this is such a short piece you captured the essence of the family dynamics of the seahorse in a wonderful way. Great utilization of the right picture. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my piece on the hardworking seahorse!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice, colorful image.
-This is a very well written
nonet with the correct
syllable count and very good rhyme.
-You show many qualities
of the sea horse that I
wasn't aware of,
like mating for life
and the role of the dad.
-You write this with
a lot of heart for
these small creatures.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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-Very nice, colorful image.
-This is a very well written
nonet with the correct
syllable count and very good rhyme.
-You show many qualities
of the sea horse that I
wasn't aware of,
like mating for life
and the role of the dad.
-You write this with
a lot of heart for
these small creatures.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my piece on the adorable seahorse!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from dragonpoet
Nice bit of sea knowledge with an apt piece of artwork as illustration. I always like it when nature reverses what is seen as a natural thing with the male carrying the children. I wish more humans could learn to mate for life.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Nice bit of sea knowledge with an apt piece of artwork as illustration. I always like it when nature reverses what is seen as a natural thing with the male carrying the children. I wish more humans could learn to mate for life.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my piece on the adorable seahorse!
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That I did.
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Comment from LyndaS
I LOVED THIS! I have been fascinated by these little guys forever. This is a solid entry into this contest. Your nonet is formatted perfectly and each line is its own entity like it should be. This rocks! Good luck in the vote poet. Well done. Lynda
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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I LOVED THIS! I have been fascinated by these little guys forever. This is a solid entry into this contest. Your nonet is formatted perfectly and each line is its own entity like it should be. This rocks! Good luck in the vote poet. Well done. Lynda
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my piece on the seahorse - they are so adorable!
Comment from zanya
How cute are these little sea creatures - they do have their life style and ways of being - a little lesson in love too perhaps !1- and such a lovely pic-
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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How cute are these little sea creatures - they do have their life style and ways of being - a little lesson in love too perhaps !1- and such a lovely pic-
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my nonet on the seahorse!
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, His Work is Never Done, has the proper nine-to-one descending syllable count and tells a clever, rhyming tale of the 'never done' sea horse dad. Fun.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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This nonet, His Work is Never Done, has the proper nine-to-one descending syllable count and tells a clever, rhyming tale of the 'never done' sea horse dad. Fun.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my nonet on the seahorse!
