Don't Stop Until You Reach It
The end is not for us to see, but the journey continues...8 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
This is lovely quatrain and photo art, too. It makes me feel like I could walk into eternity. How beautiful this is.
I just realized that for some reason, yet again, I am not being alerted to your posts. What gives? I have fanned you repeatedly. I will do it again right now. I have already missed so much!
All my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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This is lovely quatrain and photo art, too. It makes me feel like I could walk into eternity. How beautiful this is.
I just realized that for some reason, yet again, I am not being alerted to your posts. What gives? I have fanned you repeatedly. I will do it again right now. I have already missed so much!
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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No, most of these were contest writes so you're probably still in the good.... I don't have a whole lot of time over the next few weeks and the contests are usually a quick write that I didn't have to think up the topic for (but i still get my writing stress relief - lol!). :) ;) in the next few minutes I'll be posting my 5-7-5 that I wrote last week before the madness that is these next few weeks began.... so if it's not there in the morning in your message box, then you should worry! ;) :) LOL! Take care, Beautiful Lady Sal!! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written quatrain with an encouraging message to set our goals just beyond the horizon and never stop until we reached our goals.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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A very well-written quatrain with an encouraging message to set our goals just beyond the horizon and never stop until we reached our goals.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you for stopping in on this one, Sandra. :)
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Well penned wisdom. Few words give a valuable insight we need in all situations. The art work is inviting stepping back from self... and considering that there is a bigger picture.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Well penned wisdom. Few words give a valuable insight we need in all situations. The art work is inviting stepping back from self... and considering that there is a bigger picture.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Donka. Happy Easter! :)
Comment from QC Poet
Setting goals to strive towards is good as long as we don't get caught up in accomplishing them at the cost of hurting others. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight, Good Luck in the contest and may if entered. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Setting goals to strive towards is good as long as we don't get caught up in accomplishing them at the cost of hurting others. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight, Good Luck in the contest and may if entered. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I love the image of "The Finish Line." It is lovely and is well suited for this piece. I love the message and theme, of all of us aiming ourselves, toward the "finish line..." My favorite lines are the third and fourth ones. I especially like the phrase "see the horizon as your finish line..." One never truly reaches the end. It is always ahead on the horizon. As you say, in the line above the title, "the journey continues..." Well written with an excellent message.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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I love the image of "The Finish Line." It is lovely and is well suited for this piece. I love the message and theme, of all of us aiming ourselves, toward the "finish line..." My favorite lines are the third and fourth ones. I especially like the phrase "see the horizon as your finish line..." One never truly reaches the end. It is always ahead on the horizon. As you say, in the line above the title, "the journey continues..." Well written with an excellent message.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Thank you so very much, as always, Jesse, for your thoughtful and in-depth review -- so glad you found my meaning in this one. Thank you for stopping by! :)
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Yes, I found, and 'get' the meaning of your poem. Thank you for finding value in my review. I enjoyed the read very much.
Jesse
Comment from Tina Crute
This is full of truth, about how we tend to run our days, trying to handle burdens, when we need to look at them as steps to the finish line, which is on the horizon, It reminds me of the saying, :Keep your mind on the prize." Very well said, and if I had another six, you would get it:)
Tina
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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This is full of truth, about how we tend to run our days, trying to handle burdens, when we need to look at them as steps to the finish line, which is on the horizon, It reminds me of the saying, :Keep your mind on the prize." Very well said, and if I had another six, you would get it:)
Tina
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Thank you so very much, as always, Tina, for your thoughtful and insightful -- so glad you caught my meaning in this one. Thank you for stopping by! :)
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You are welcome, so much!
Comment from zlp22
Good poem about life. We have to compete for everything now and start at a very young age.Word flow makes it an easy and fast read. Good luck in the contest and Happy Easter.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Good poem about life. We have to compete for everything now and start at a very young age.Word flow makes it an easy and fast read. Good luck in the contest and Happy Easter.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, zlp. Happy Easter to you, too. :)
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a fantastic entry into the contest. Each aspect of your presentation works in the concert with the rest and yet the poem stands alone as fine wisdom.
Wishing you much luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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This is a fantastic entry into the contest. Each aspect of your presentation works in the concert with the rest and yet the poem stands alone as fine wisdom.
Wishing you much luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review and lovely comments, Gloria. :)
