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An irresistibly decadent sweet dessert
13 total reviews
Comment from
24chas
This was a fun read. I loved the way it flowed and the message, of course, was terrific. I smiled when I read it and could appreciate the theme. Good job.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
Comment from
beizanten
That picture make me hungry. A well written and interesting piece of poetry you potray the deliciousness of the food well. You done great keep up the great work!
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
What a tasty review. Thank you!
Comment from
Randa Dayle
A suite for sweets... I am so sorry they attach to our thighs...because they are soo goood! What a fun poem for the contest. May you continue sharing with us!
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
It's all too true that whatever I like is fattening or a sin.
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