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Comment from Khurram1
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A good poem for the contest as it follows the required rhyme scheme. The last two lines express the very nature of human being with a desire to be loved.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
    Thank you for your review and five stars. I really didn't expect it to go as far as it has. Thanks to the other poets it has become quite popular. Thanks again.
Comment from royowen
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There is no better virtue in the universe than that of loving or caring, because it generates compassion, a desire to do good, an adversity to judge or sin. I honestly wish I could live up to that Willie, only one can. Beautfully written my friend, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019

Comment from Susanjohn
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Such a sweet poem and I can see why it is a winner!! So few words with big meaning! You really said it all here...well done and I enjoyed reading :-))

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019

Comment from mrsmajor
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Congratulations on the Win...I can see why this short piece, touched us...it offers a message that's meaningful and true...
You used excellent rhyming words, and I enjoyed reading.

Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
    Thanks very much for your congrats. The five stars are very much appreciated, I am happy so many
    fellow poets enjoyed it.
reply by mrsmajor on 25-Apr-2019

    You're quite welcome, it was my pleasure!
Comment from Kerry Foley
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Hello there, my friend. Congratulations on your win, this is a fabulous little poem. Nicely done! Enjoy the weekend. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019

Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

I really liked this little piece. It's spot on and very uplifting and hopeful. I can easily see how it took the prize.

great flow and easily followed.
All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019

Comment from Mastery
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Excellent writing, Pete. Your rhymes are spot on and the way you stacked the poem is original and very well done, my friend. Welcome aboard Fanstory (belated as it is) Good job. Bob

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019

Comment from jenintorre
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Congratulations on winning the competition,not is so well deserved. I reAlly enjoyed reading your poem.Your words are so true. Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019

Comment from Janet Foor
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Congratulation on the Win. I enjoyed reading this rhyming poem with a wonderful message. Indeed, if we are loved, we have it all.

Well done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019

Comment from SLMorrical
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Wonderful poem. I can see why it won the contest. This flows very well. I have to agree if we are loved we do have it all. I can relate to this poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019