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Comment from Khurram1
A good poem for the contest as it follows the required rhyme scheme. The last two lines express the very nature of human being with a desire to be loved.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
A good poem for the contest as it follows the required rhyme scheme. The last two lines express the very nature of human being with a desire to be loved.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review and five stars. I really didn't expect it to go as far as it has. Thanks to the other poets it has become quite popular. Thanks again.
Comment from royowen
There is no better virtue in the universe than that of loving or caring, because it generates compassion, a desire to do good, an adversity to judge or sin. I honestly wish I could live up to that Willie, only one can. Beautfully written my friend, blessings, Roy
There is no better virtue in the universe than that of loving or caring, because it generates compassion, a desire to do good, an adversity to judge or sin. I honestly wish I could live up to that Willie, only one can. Beautfully written my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
Comment from Susanjohn
Such a sweet poem and I can see why it is a winner!! So few words with big meaning! You really said it all here...well done and I enjoyed reading :-))
Such a sweet poem and I can see why it is a winner!! So few words with big meaning! You really said it all here...well done and I enjoyed reading :-))
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
Comment from mrsmajor
Congratulations on the Win...I can see why this short piece, touched us...it offers a message that's meaningful and true...
You used excellent rhyming words, and I enjoyed reading.
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
Congratulations on the Win...I can see why this short piece, touched us...it offers a message that's meaningful and true...
You used excellent rhyming words, and I enjoyed reading.
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Thanks very much for your congrats. The five stars are very much appreciated, I am happy so many
fellow poets enjoyed it.
You're quite welcome, it was my pleasure!
Comment from Kerry Foley
Hello there, my friend. Congratulations on your win, this is a fabulous little poem. Nicely done! Enjoy the weekend. ~Kerry
Hello there, my friend. Congratulations on your win, this is a fabulous little poem. Nicely done! Enjoy the weekend. ~Kerry
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I really liked this little piece. It's spot on and very uplifting and hopeful. I can easily see how it took the prize.
great flow and easily followed.
All the best
GMG
Hi there,
I really liked this little piece. It's spot on and very uplifting and hopeful. I can easily see how it took the prize.
great flow and easily followed.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
Comment from Mastery
Excellent writing, Pete. Your rhymes are spot on and the way you stacked the poem is original and very well done, my friend. Welcome aboard Fanstory (belated as it is) Good job. Bob
Excellent writing, Pete. Your rhymes are spot on and the way you stacked the poem is original and very well done, my friend. Welcome aboard Fanstory (belated as it is) Good job. Bob
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
Comment from jenintorre
Congratulations on winning the competition,not is so well deserved. I reAlly enjoyed reading your poem.Your words are so true. Best wishes. Jen.
Congratulations on winning the competition,not is so well deserved. I reAlly enjoyed reading your poem.Your words are so true. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
Comment from Janet Foor
Congratulation on the Win. I enjoyed reading this rhyming poem with a wonderful message. Indeed, if we are loved, we have it all.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Congratulation on the Win. I enjoyed reading this rhyming poem with a wonderful message. Indeed, if we are loved, we have it all.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
Comment from SLMorrical
Wonderful poem. I can see why it won the contest. This flows very well. I have to agree if we are loved we do have it all. I can relate to this poem. Well done.
Wonderful poem. I can see why it won the contest. This flows very well. I have to agree if we are loved we do have it all. I can relate to this poem. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019