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NaPoWriMo 2019

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National Poetry Writing Month

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem. I am not sure about the rules of the echo poem and will not judge you on that, but the topic you choose is good, colorful and enticing.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 20-May-2019
    Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Alicia. This is a happy poem, well illustrated with colorful tulips as well as words that depict the joy we feel at Easter and other holidays. Celebrations usually involve sweets and food--feel good things. Easter is an upbeat time celebrating a religious event, but not all celebrate it that way. For whatever reason, we find joy at Easter, it's a great experience. Marilyn

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Hi! Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Alicia, your poem reminds me of when we were kids...
My mother making our baskets...and getting ready for Easter...and I love all the beautiful flowers that bloom around Easter...so very nicely written sweet girl....I love your poem...and love your beautiful picture....love you...Linda xxoo. and Happy Easter to you and you family....

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Hi! Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from 24chas
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This was a good read, sunnilicious. I liked the flow of it and the imagery. You certainly captured the Easter / spring time feeling that people get. Nice job.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Hi! Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from lyenochka
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I get this feeling of happiness in candy. Thanks for the fun poem which shows us the joy of sweetness and the beauty of spring flowers. Happy Resurrection Day to you!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Hi! Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Carla Trinklein
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Such a fun reminder of the many beautiful distractions at Easter time! Actually, we like to microwave our Peeps for about 10-15 seconds and watch them inflate, but "microwave" would mess up the rhythm of your poem, so stick with "stretch." Nicely done!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Hi! That sounds like fun. I'll have to remember microwaved peeps. I tried a chocolate dipped peep this year. It was different. Too sweet, but you're nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Joan E.
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I was not familiar with the Echo Verse Poem, but regardless of the form, I enjoyed your salute to springtime and Easter. Your artwork selection is delicious, eye candy! I appreciated your appeal to our senses of sight, smell and sound plus the feeling of love! Happy, happy Easter- Joan

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Hi Joan! You're the nicest. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Sunni,

This is delightful spring / Easter poem. It is very well written and truly uplifting to read. Lots of good energy in this work, my friend. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Thank you :)
Comment from Irish Rain
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Lovely Miss Alicia!
I love all of your Easter descriptions.
I love the candy!
I ate my bunnies ears last night, ha ha.
I hope you have a beautiful
Easter weekend.
Loved your sweet poem,
God bless...

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-May-2019
    Hi Judy! You're the best. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)