Seasons in Life
a quatrain3 total reviews
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
"Seasons of Life" is an excellent quatrain contest entry. I enjoyed each of the four stanza and your rhyming scheme of rigor and vigor! This is a wonderful way to pair aging with the fours seasons of life.
My best in winning the contest!
Deborah
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Dear Author,
"Seasons of Life" is an excellent quatrain contest entry. I enjoyed each of the four stanza and your rhyming scheme of rigor and vigor! This is a wonderful way to pair aging with the fours seasons of life.
My best in winning the contest!
Deborah
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thank you! Truly appreciate the stars, the comments and the best wish!
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My pleasure
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You have met the requirements
with your quatrain.
-I like your topic, and how
you show a characteristic
of each season.
-The rhyme is good, and
the poems flows well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You have met the requirements
with your quatrain.
-I like your topic, and how
you show a characteristic
of each season.
-The rhyme is good, and
the poems flows well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Greatly appreciate your rating, comments and best wishes!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You have all the seasons neatly wrapped up here, I have a suggestion for your third line: "then comes Autumn, (those) days swiftly pass," best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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You have all the seasons neatly wrapped up here, I have a suggestion for your third line: "then comes Autumn, (those) days swiftly pass," best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Appreciate the rating, best wishes and suggestion!
