Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

Inside each of us Lives Hope for A legacy outside ourselves
What a Great Powerful 5-7-5 very Haikuish, Good thing to strive for. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019

Thank you for your review. ;) Have a wonderful evening!

Comment from Karen Payton Holt

Excellent

A complex human condition very clearly brought to life. The consequence of life is to leave our mark, be it by leaving offspring, creating something tangible that lasts, or by altering the course of others, our being here has an effect.

Great contest entry.

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019

Thank you for your review. ;)

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This is a statement that should resonate with all aspiring writers here on FanStory. At least some element of any artistic purpose is the desire to have what lies within us recognised by others.

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019

Thank you for your review. ;)