Affection's Refrain
A 3-5-3 Passion Offering10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Affection's Refrain, has the proper syllable set up and looks for the beat in the heart of a relationship. It must go on.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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This 3-5-3, Affection's Refrain, has the proper syllable set up and looks for the beat in the heart of a relationship. It must go on.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thanx for the review, Bill. :) I apologize for the delayed response... this end of the year is extra this year with family stuff, too! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
You got the music and I got the beat what say we dance to the midnight sound, Yvette. :) ;) Then again, forget it I got a headache. :) Just kidding Yvette we both came in third place. Congratulations!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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You got the music and I got the beat what say we dance to the midnight sound, Yvette. :) ;) Then again, forget it I got a headache. :) Just kidding Yvette we both came in third place. Congratulations!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Noooo!! I hope your headache's better, Jose -- I was looking forward to the dancing! :) ;) Thanx for the congrats, sir, and congrats right back atcha! :) ;) Take care over there! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Nanny 6
As I read through the entries for the contest, this entry made me stop and read several times. Because of the awesome poetic nature of this splendid piece, I believe it does have my vote. Great job and good luck in the contest!
Judy
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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As I read through the entries for the contest, this entry made me stop and read several times. Because of the awesome poetic nature of this splendid piece, I believe it does have my vote. Great job and good luck in the contest!
Judy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review and your lovely comments, Judy -- have a wonderful evening! :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the great effort we take to keep up with the rhythm of love during a passion song. Great artwork to complement your poem.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the great effort we take to keep up with the rhythm of love during a passion song. Great artwork to complement your poem.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your time and your review, Sandra -- have a wonderful day! :)
Comment from Mark D. R.
lovely music created by heartbeat
Illustration is a terrific complememt to your syllable restricted verse.
I would have used red text instead of white on black to emphasize your passion LOL
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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lovely music created by heartbeat
Illustration is a terrific complememt to your syllable restricted verse.
I would have used red text instead of white on black to emphasize your passion LOL
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. ;)
Comment from James Upshaw
I like this poem. Very simple and sweet. Comparing the rhythm of one's heart to a passionate love song. Thank you for writing this work of art. Good job!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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I like this poem. Very simple and sweet. Comparing the rhythm of one's heart to a passionate love song. Thank you for writing this work of art. Good job!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. ;)
Comment from 24chas
This was a good write. I like the idea of using music as a symbol for love and passion. Nice artwork as well which enhanced the poem. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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This was a good write. I like the idea of using music as a symbol for love and passion. Nice artwork as well which enhanced the poem. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Chas. :)
Comment from Gloria ....
A nicely written entry into the contest, author. Love is like a rhythm and it does make the heart beat a little faster.
Most enjoyable and best of luck to you in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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A nicely written entry into the contest, author. Love is like a rhythm and it does make the heart beat a little faster.
Most enjoyable and best of luck to you in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Gloria. :)
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this concise, but stirring piece of work. The image you've selected complements the poem and it seems you've met the criteria of the competition well; good luck with it!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Congratulations on this concise, but stirring piece of work. The image you've selected complements the poem and it seems you've met the criteria of the competition well; good luck with it!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Abby. :)
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Very nicely written poem about passionate love. Nothing to suggest editing in this great contest entry. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Very nicely written poem about passionate love. Nothing to suggest editing in this great contest entry. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Jan. :)
