Poetic Treasures and Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "White Scars, Black Scars"A book on nature and feelings and spirituality.
7 total reviews
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Donna -
I really enjoyed your double etheree. I do love the Etheree form and chose to write them often. A double is all the better.
You've employed some subtle cross rhyme and just create and overall pleasing image with your words.
Great job!
Kim
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Hi Donna -
I really enjoyed your double etheree. I do love the Etheree form and chose to write them often. A double is all the better.
You've employed some subtle cross rhyme and just create and overall pleasing image with your words.
Great job!
Kim
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Dear Kim, Thanks for your comments and review. Donna Thank you for your compliment!
Comment from Bill Schott
This double, flip flop etheree, White Scars/Black Scars, has the proper formatting for this pairing and creates the scene where the glistening snow ebbs away and the stark, still-stifled trees emerge.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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This double, flip flop etheree, White Scars/Black Scars, has the proper formatting for this pairing and creates the scene where the glistening snow ebbs away and the stark, still-stifled trees emerge.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Dear Bill, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from James Upshaw
Wow. This is absolutely beautiful. Incredible dichotomy between the white and the dark landscapes. I love the description of the white scars as the backs of elders' hands. That is very clever. Thank you for writing this beautiful imagery.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Wow. This is absolutely beautiful. Incredible dichotomy between the white and the dark landscapes. I love the description of the white scars as the backs of elders' hands. That is very clever. Thank you for writing this beautiful imagery.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Dear James, Thank you for your compliments, comments and review. Dove
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Dove,
This is a lovely poem about the transition from the starkness of winter to springtime's renewal of all life. Great contrast you make here. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Hi Dove,
This is a lovely poem about the transition from the starkness of winter to springtime's renewal of all life. Great contrast you make here. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Dear Jan, Thank you for your comments and review. Donna (Dove)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
As new life emerges, the old is discarded in your poem here. A very descriptive write filled with promise of new life, best wishes . . . . love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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As new life emerges, the old is discarded in your poem here. A very descriptive write filled with promise of new life, best wishes . . . . love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna xx
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like your description of the coming of spring as the land thaws and the snow melts. Good choice of images in this writing which is well done. Thanks for sharing.
Bill
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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I like your description of the coming of spring as the land thaws and the snow melts. Good choice of images in this writing which is well done. Thanks for sharing.
Bill
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Dear Bill, Thank you for your review and comments. Dove
Comment from Possummagic
Beautifully written. You've used such beautiful, descriptive words in this poem and each has added to the beauty of the whole story. Did you mean to write "snow with ice floes"? Or did yo mean "flows" I loved this poem. Good luck.PM
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Beautifully written. You've used such beautiful, descriptive words in this poem and each has added to the beauty of the whole story. Did you mean to write "snow with ice floes"? Or did yo mean "flows" I loved this poem. Good luck.PM
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Dear PM, Thank you for your comments and review. I meant Floes, that is how it is spelled when you're referring to ice. Dove
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Thank you, I have learnt something today. Possibly the word is foreign to me because it doesn?t snow where I live and any snow I?ve ever seen in my adult life has been man made. Great poem though. PM