Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-5-3, Red Hot Recklessness, has the proper syllable set up and seems to warn how a fevered frenzy into love can get one burned. Worth the risk.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019

"Worth the risk", oh snap! Thanks for the concise review, cheers, judester

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

awwwww, but that recklessness has its benefits, even if they are temporary -- what a cool pic, too! ;); ) Thanx for sharing and best of luck a the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review. Yes passion does have it's benefits but mixed with recklessness can be dangerous. Cheers,

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I like the atmospherics in your passion write and could feel the fire flames and the burn in your words, I liked this poem, it has soulful passion, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review Dolly. Passion and recklessness are a bad combination, hah. Cheers,

Comment from Mark D. R.

Exceptional

Your verse and illustration are a super combination. Your words vividly describe your thoughts.

One minor (editorial) appearance nit pick:

insert a space after 'flares' and before your dash mark

eliminate the period after 'flames' - for this short verse, it adds nothing to your plate

Neither affected my review!

Good luck in this writing prompt.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review and sparkly stars. I put in the space and found the squiggly dash and removed the period. Much better and thanks. I usually avoid capital letters and punctuation, so this suits me fine. Cheers, j