Sensational Discovery
You can't be anything until you know who you are...43 total reviews
Comment from Tina Crute
Without question a six. There is too much 'noise' going on in the world, as id people are afraid of the silence. i am trying to write about that, and the Bible verse...'Be still and know that I am God'... pops into my brain.
I love everything about this, and wish I was talented enough to reach depths like this.
Your picture is vague and perfect for the poem about being quiet and using your senses , feeling how you breathe, what you are, what you want to be...
Just wonderful! You need to put this by mine on your wall! It's awesome. It is being bookmarked and put on my office wall. Thank you:)
Love ,
Tina
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Without question a six. There is too much 'noise' going on in the world, as id people are afraid of the silence. i am trying to write about that, and the Bible verse...'Be still and know that I am God'... pops into my brain.
I love everything about this, and wish I was talented enough to reach depths like this.
Your picture is vague and perfect for the poem about being quiet and using your senses , feeling how you breathe, what you are, what you want to be...
Just wonderful! You need to put this by mine on your wall! It's awesome. It is being bookmarked and put on my office wall. Thank you:)
Love ,
Tina
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Oh, you are wonderful, Tina!! :) Thank you for those lovely stars and, more importantly, for this thoughtful and encouraging review!! :) :) And you are so right, as I said in my author notes, youth today really are 'afraid of the stillness' -- it's like if there's not some kind of cranial stimulation, they may just go crazy! ;) ;) You take care this week, ma'am, and have a great week! :) ;) Yvette
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Us grown-ups can
be that way at times
too, when we get going
and have a million things
to do, we forget how
restful a few minutes
of silence is.! My
husband and I stopped
TV in our house and
we noticedhow much
happier we are, like
contented. I think the
noise and commercials
of the TV stress us out :-)
We watch Pureflix or
Pluto tv, so no cable fees!
Blessings on your day...
and week!
Love,
Tina
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Us grown-ups can
be that way at times
too, when we get going
and have a million things
to do, we forget how
restful a few minutes
of silence is.! My
husband and I stopped
TV in our house and
we noticedhow much
happier we are, like
contented. I think the
noise and commercials
of the TV stress us out :-)
We watch Pureflix or
Pluto tv, so no cable fees!
Blessings on your day...
and week!
Love,
Tina
Comment from royowen
Well done Yvette, you are so right concerning these things, just to sit in the presence of nothingness, I don't believe we actually do sit in nothingness, but in the presence of cal,, as you say my friend. And excellent entry in this contest, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Well done Yvette, you are so right concerning these things, just to sit in the presence of nothingness, I don't believe we actually do sit in nothingness, but in the presence of cal,, as you say my friend. And excellent entry in this contest, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful and insightful comments on this one, Roy -- so glad you could relate to my "only three weeks plus exams left' poetry write... :) :) LOL! :) Take care over there, sir! :) Yvette
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Well done
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
This great trio of 3-6-9 should be required reading in every English class!
Once a teacher myself, I've had the change to make the same observation as you.
These are perfectly constructed 3-6-9s. How you traversed from stanza to stanza is is both logical and beautiful at the same time. This is one for my bookcase to read when needed to be reminded of its sage advise. Best wishes in the contest!
Sincerely,
Luv&stuff
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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This great trio of 3-6-9 should be required reading in every English class!
Once a teacher myself, I've had the change to make the same observation as you.
These are perfectly constructed 3-6-9s. How you traversed from stanza to stanza is is both logical and beautiful at the same time. This is one for my bookcase to read when needed to be reminded of its sage advise. Best wishes in the contest!
Sincerely,
Luv&stuff
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Wow, luv&stuff! :) You've just put a great smile on my face with those lovely stars and, especially, with your detailed and encouraging comments! :) ;) The fact that you took the time to analyze this offering really means a lot -- thank you and have a wonderful week! :) Yvette :)
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You are most welcome! Luv
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-6-9 suite and good advice to find ourselves in an over technological world where there are too much electronics and distractions that keep the mind busy with unnecessary things.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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A very well-written 3-6-9 suite and good advice to find ourselves in an over technological world where there are too much electronics and distractions that keep the mind busy with unnecessary things.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanx for stopping in for a review on this one, Sandra, your comments are always encouraging and appreciated! :) ;) Take care and have a great week! :) Yvette
Comment from Sugarray77
Beautifully done, Yvette. I enjoyed reading this calming and serene poem. You executed the form perfectly with style and flair. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Beautifully done, Yvette. I enjoyed reading this calming and serene poem. You executed the form perfectly with style and flair. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanx for stopping in for a review on this one, Melissa -- always appreciated! :) ;) Take care and have a great week! :) Yvette
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello YM - three very well written three stanzas, all in true form. Each gives good advice and I particularly like your sub-title 'You can't be anything until you know who you are...'. The whole of this work gives good advice in pure poetic form. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hello YM - three very well written three stanzas, all in true form. Each gives good advice and I particularly like your sub-title 'You can't be anything until you know who you are...'. The whole of this work gives good advice in pure poetic form. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanx for stopping in for a review on this one, Dorothy, and for your wonderful comments.... I'm so glad you could relate to where I was coming from on this one! :) ;) Take care and have a great week! :) Yvette
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all syllables and lines in this lovely
poem about the power of silence. Just being quiet and still can enhance
self-realization.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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You have made excellent use of all syllables and lines in this lovely
poem about the power of silence. Just being quiet and still can enhance
self-realization.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanx for stopping in for a review on this one, Janice -- always appreciated! :) ;) Take care and have a great week! :) Yvette
Comment from Bucketlist
Meditation does certainly calm us back to our true being Our minds are the only place where each of us can calmly exist in a tumultuous world . This is a very nice entry for the contest, I wish you luck. Thanks for the health tip.
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Meditation does certainly calm us back to our true being Our minds are the only place where each of us can calmly exist in a tumultuous world . This is a very nice entry for the contest, I wish you luck. Thanks for the health tip.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for your lovely comments on this one, Trisha -- so glad you enjoyed my 'the end of the school year is coming, I just KNOW it is' poem!! :) ;) LOL! :) :) Take care, ma'am, and have a great week! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the contest Yvette. This was very well done, easy to read, easy to understand. It said a lot but made total sense. I liked the way you broke it down to three of the senses of touch, taste and smell. It was great.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Good luck in the contest Yvette. This was very well done, easy to read, easy to understand. It said a lot but made total sense. I liked the way you broke it down to three of the senses of touch, taste and smell. It was great.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Ali -- I always appreciate your input on these poetry writes. This one was the teacher on her front porch at the end of last week trying to tell herself that there's only three weeks plus exams remaining... :) :) LOL! :) Take care! :) Yvette
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You are so welcome Yvette, it was so enjoyable. Wow, here's hoping the time will pass quickly.
Comment from Sally Law
I love your 3-6-9, my sweet. The color change made this so much easier to read. Bless you for making the changes for me. Me olā?? blind eyes!!
Your chosen artwork was superb and drew me in, as did your fame and friendship. :+))
All my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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I love your 3-6-9, my sweet. The color change made this so much easier to read. Bless you for making the changes for me. Me olā?? blind eyes!!
Your chosen artwork was superb and drew me in, as did your fame and friendship. :+))
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you!!! ;) I changed one of the colors and lightened the back ground... let me know what you think, please.... ?
