Forgive
Forgiveness poem4 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ah, but we don't forgive for the other person; we do it for ourselves. Forgiving someone doesn't mean we condone what they did. (And we don't forget.)
But that's purely my opinion on content. The poem itself is very well done, technically wonderful. Good luck in the booth!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Ah, but we don't forgive for the other person; we do it for ourselves. Forgiving someone doesn't mean we condone what they did. (And we don't forget.)
But that's purely my opinion on content. The poem itself is very well done, technically wonderful. Good luck in the booth!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Interesting angle on the topic -thanks for reading zanya
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You're welcome.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh my - this is wise and deep and perfect with just seventeen syllables. How did you do that? (Immense talent, is the correct answer, I believe!) Best of luck to you with this entry. It's fantastic. xo
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Oh my - this is wise and deep and perfect with just seventeen syllables. How did you do that? (Immense talent, is the correct answer, I believe!) Best of luck to you with this entry. It's fantastic. xo
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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What a superb review ! zanya
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A superb entry deserves no less! xo
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Very nicely done. And a cute graphic you have chosen to complement your verse, which it does effectively. Sometimes, though, forgiveness cannot be a two-way street for various reasons. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Very nicely done. And a cute graphic you have chosen to complement your verse, which it does effectively. Sometimes, though, forgiveness cannot be a two-way street for various reasons. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan :-)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Yes forgiveness is always an interesting topic zanya
Comment from Gypsymooncat
This is very clever! It's always great to have someone show us another way to look at things, and in this case, drawing the analogy of congested traffic as the path to forgiveness shows great imagination and skill.
I sure hope you win!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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This is very clever! It's always great to have someone show us another way to look at things, and in this case, drawing the analogy of congested traffic as the path to forgiveness shows great imagination and skill.
I sure hope you win!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Super sentiments - thanks for sharing zanya
