Daddy's Little Princess
Story in a Poem. It's a contest entry.12 total reviews
Comment from BlueMarble
Wow. What a wonderfully well thought out and enjoyable story! I truly enjoyed reading it and can find nothing that needs changing or correcting.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Wow. What a wonderfully well thought out and enjoyable story! I truly enjoyed reading it and can find nothing that needs changing or correcting.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for the great review and big sixer, Blue. I had a premise of the story in my head when I started it but details changed along the way when writing it. I was happy with the results though. Lol. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great rest of your weekend. Thank you again.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Ooooh, this is an excellent, imaginitive and very well written story poem with a surprise ending. Nothing amiss here for me to suggest you consider revising. Good luck and thanks for a great read. Jan :-)
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Ooooh, this is an excellent, imaginitive and very well written story poem with a surprise ending. Nothing amiss here for me to suggest you consider revising. Good luck and thanks for a great read. Jan :-)
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Jan. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked my lengthy tale. Have a great night.
