The Insistent Roommate
Everybody's got one...11 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written eighty-word flash fiction about an inistent roommate that nearly got eaten but the poor cat convince the red dragon it will be better for him to eat some fish.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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A very well-written eighty-word flash fiction about an inistent roommate that nearly got eaten but the poor cat convince the red dragon it will be better for him to eat some fish.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for your review on Red and his pet kitten, Sandra -- I just couldn't pass on their audition for the part in my flash write... LOL! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Dean Kuch
So, I guess one could claim that this dragon...this big, bad, red, fire-breathing dragon...was pussy whipped, heh-heh?
Hey, it's okay, Mr. Red Dragon.
It happens to the best of us.
Speaking of "bests", best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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So, I guess one could claim that this dragon...this big, bad, red, fire-breathing dragon...was pussy whipped, heh-heh?
Hey, it's okay, Mr. Red Dragon.
It happens to the best of us.
Speaking of "bests", best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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LOL! Guess you're right!! ;) Glad you stopped by for this one, Dean -- I always enjoy hearing from you! ;) I know I'm supposed to keep these responses short, but sometimes I can't help it with your wonderful comments!! ;) I have yours and Gidget's pic here to remind me to smile even when I might not feel like it... ;) ;) Thanx again, and take care of the both of you! ;) And I promise to go back to short replies next time! ;) ;) Yvette
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The pleasure's all mine, Yvette.
I enjoy chatting with you too!
Have a relaxing Sunday.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahaha! Well, I am certainly glad it was a FRIENDLY dragon or that little roommate would have quickly used up all nine lives, yes? What a charming ending and a fun read. Best of luck in the booth. :)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Hahaha! Well, I am certainly glad it was a FRIENDLY dragon or that little roommate would have quickly used up all nine lives, yes? What a charming ending and a fun read. Best of luck in the booth. :)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review, Dawn. :)
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It was my pleasure.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
That's really funny. You usually have one you can't get rid of, sometimes two. I like what you were able to present and bring forth so well with so few words. I enjoyed reading this. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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That's really funny. You usually have one you can't get rid of, sometimes two. I like what you were able to present and bring forth so well with so few words. I enjoyed reading this. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review, Jeffrey. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This eighty-word flash fiction story, The Insistent Roommate, has the proper word count and brings us to a quaint and friendly ending. Nice.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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This eighty-word flash fiction story, The Insistent Roommate, has the proper word count and brings us to a quaint and friendly ending. Nice.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review, Bill. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Some friends you just can't brush aside, they keep rolling back like bad pennies! He he he, you made me smile here and I enjoyed your story, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Some friends you just can't brush aside, they keep rolling back like bad pennies! He he he, you made me smile here and I enjoyed your story, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Dolly - glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Bill Pinder
This is an excellent entry for the contest. Great idea to create a story of a dragon being driven nuts by his roommate. I like how you incorporated humor into the twist in the story.
Bill
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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This is an excellent entry for the contest. Great idea to create a story of a dragon being driven nuts by his roommate. I like how you incorporated humor into the twist in the story.
Bill
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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What a wonderful greeting this day, Bill!! :) ;) Thank you so very much for those lovely stars -- and I'm so glad you enjoyed Red and his little kitten .... I had hoped to put a smile on folks' faces and there seems to be a lot of 'darkness' in many of the 'short writes' these days! :) :) Take care! :)
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
This is very well written and a nice contest entry. I am not sure what I'm missing here, but I am clueless as to who or what Mittens is and what Mittens has to do with fish. A cat perhaps? Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
This is very well written and a nice contest entry. I am not sure what I'm missing here, but I am clueless as to who or what Mittens is and what Mittens has to do with fish. A cat perhaps? Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan :-)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Give it a look now...;) Thank you for the review, Jan. :)
Comment from Sandra Montanino
I like the picture and the story. I was expecting him--as dangerous as he looks--to go after some big game, but he settled on a fish. It put a smile on my face. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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I like the picture and the story. I was expecting him--as dangerous as he looks--to go after some big game, but he settled on a fish. It put a smile on my face. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review. ;)
Comment from LisaMay
OK, so Mittens the kitten, whose purring is echoing off the cave walls, is hungry and wants some breakfast, preferably fish. It is heart-warming to now that even dragons like having a companion pet. This is a charming little story.
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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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OK, so Mittens the kitten, whose purring is echoing off the cave walls, is hungry and wants some breakfast, preferably fish. It is heart-warming to now that even dragons like having a companion pet. This is a charming little story.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review.
