NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "haiku (purple passion sprout)"National Poetry Writing Month
6 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Alicia, I'm sorry your having trouble with your picture...but I bet it is beautiful...just sounds like it...
nature untouched is always beautiful...I love your poem sweet girl...and love your pretty purple background...very nicely written my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hi Alicia, I'm sorry your having trouble with your picture...but I bet it is beautiful...just sounds like it...
nature untouched is always beautiful...I love your poem sweet girl...and love your pretty purple background...very nicely written my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Great alliteration in your Haiku, Alicia. Too bad the picture didn't upload for you. It's always nice to see a surprise in nature. :)
Hugs,
Connie
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Great alliteration in your Haiku, Alicia. Too bad the picture didn't upload for you. It's always nice to see a surprise in nature. :)
Hugs,
Connie
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hi Connie! I'm catching up from Easter. Hope you had a wonderful Canadian Independance Day. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Joan E.
Your 5-7-5 haiku is gorgeous and requires no picture for us to visualize the pristine "prettiness" of the "sprout" on the "old tree stump". Your abundant alliteration adds to the intensity. Big cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Your 5-7-5 haiku is gorgeous and requires no picture for us to visualize the pristine "prettiness" of the "sprout" on the "old tree stump". Your abundant alliteration adds to the intensity. Big cheers- Joan
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. Sorry not to see the picture you took. I'm wondering what the purple passion sprout on the tree is, fuels the imagination. Probably some sort of mushroom or fungus. They can be pretty, too. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hi Alicia. Sorry not to see the picture you took. I'm wondering what the purple passion sprout on the tree is, fuels the imagination. Probably some sort of mushroom or fungus. They can be pretty, too. Marilyn
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hi Marilyn! It was an orchid planted on moss on the tree. Somebody stole it. Maybe the next day. It was a nice sight. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from royowen
I love it when one sees a flower perched on something, many it shouldn't, it reveals the tenacity of nature, like the lone flower on a snowy, rocky slope of a mountain. Well done, beautifully writtem Alicia, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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I love it when one sees a flower perched on something, many it shouldn't, it reveals the tenacity of nature, like the lone flower on a snowy, rocky slope of a mountain. Well done, beautifully writtem Alicia, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hi Roy! It was an orchid on a stump. Somebody stole it. Thank you. God bless you :)
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That's sad
Comment from 24chas
This was really a good write, sunnilicious. I liked the use of alliteration in the piece. The first line all the way with it, and the beginning of the second and third lines are well done. Your words describe a picture already that I can see in my mind. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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This was really a good write, sunnilicious. I liked the use of alliteration in the piece. The first line all the way with it, and the beginning of the second and third lines are well done. Your words describe a picture already that I can see in my mind. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you
God bless you :)