Nature's Finest on the Field
Bringing light to the baseball diamond and to the world...10 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written two-line poem about the perfect catcher is the west to catch that first rays of light from the east. It is game, set, and match and a home run.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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A very well-written two-line poem about the perfect catcher is the west to catch that first rays of light from the east. It is game, set, and match and a home run.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Hooray!! You understood this one, Sandra!! ;) ;) Had a few folks that didn't 'get' what I was saying here!! :) ;) Thank you and have a great weekend! :) Yvette
Comment from Dawn Munro
LOL. You have a great imagination. I bet your students call you their favorite teacher. I can picture you in class, standing tall at the front of the room, an impish grin challenging young minds to think creatively.
Superb!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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LOL. You have a great imagination. I bet your students call you their favorite teacher. I can picture you in class, standing tall at the front of the room, an impish grin challenging young minds to think creatively.
Superb!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Let's just say they do have words for me.... not all of them good - LOL! :) ;) But I do try! :) ;) Thanx for taking a look at this one... a number of reviewers didn't 'get it' ... so glad you did! :) ;) Take care, Dawn! ;) Yvette
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LOL!!! Laughing about yourdescription of students. Now as for reviewers who didn't get it... Uhhhhhhhhhhhh...
Comment from Bill Pinder
That is a clever two-line poem for the contest. Great job conveying the idea of the sun rising from the east and setting in the west and seeing the view at a baseball stadium.
Bill
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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That is a clever two-line poem for the contest. Great job conveying the idea of the sun rising from the east and setting in the west and seeing the view at a baseball stadium.
Bill
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you for actually figuring out what the author meant with this one, Bill -- you are one of the few! :) ;)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Heyyyy! What a very cool slant on an everyday occurrence that we take for granted. Now I will never, ever look at it the same way, thanks to you!! AWESOME, standout job here!! This seems like a front-runner (ha! I didn't intend that pun!) to me! xo
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Heyyyy! What a very cool slant on an everyday occurrence that we take for granted. Now I will never, ever look at it the same way, thanks to you!! AWESOME, standout job here!! This seems like a front-runner (ha! I didn't intend that pun!) to me! xo
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Rachelle.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever write and with the sun in your eyes it is an unfair advantage to the opposing team! He he he, perhaps the pitch should hav chosen a different layout when it was built. Hindsight is a wonder ful thing, Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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A clever write and with the sun in your eyes it is an unfair advantage to the opposing team! He he he, perhaps the pitch should hav chosen a different layout when it was built. Hindsight is a wonder ful thing, Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Dolly.
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, nice lay out of poetry. I don't know much about baseball only that there is a catcher always when a ball is strike. Will try to pay attention to the sport. Your presentation is excellent. Keep it up
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Hi, nice lay out of poetry. I don't know much about baseball only that there is a catcher always when a ball is strike. Will try to pay attention to the sport. Your presentation is excellent. Keep it up
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, heavenempress.
Comment from tfawcus
A great catcher indeed if he can still take the catch with the sun in his eyes! I guess this is why tennis courts are built north-south, rather than east-west.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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A great catcher indeed if he can still take the catch with the sun in his eyes! I guess this is why tennis courts are built north-south, rather than east-west.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Tony.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
East is East and West is West, twine never meet together, West is the greatest catcher of all time; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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East is East and West is West, twine never meet together, West is the greatest catcher of all time; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Ha ha ha! I love this poem. Truer words were never spoken. LOL We are in big trouble if one gets past him. Thanks for the chuckle and good luck. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Ha ha ha! I love this poem. Truer words were never spoken. LOL We are in big trouble if one gets past him. Thanks for the chuckle and good luck. Jan :-)
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Jan.
Comment from Gail Denham
Good job and isn't that what the west has done for decades and decades. People bought the stories that you could get rich (gold) that it was milk and honey - that crops grew to mighty heights. That's why we're still popular out here in the West.
I write a lot of stories about the pioneer s- we explore ghost towns - esp. in Nevada. It's of great interest
Good poem
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Good job and isn't that what the west has done for decades and decades. People bought the stories that you could get rich (gold) that it was milk and honey - that crops grew to mighty heights. That's why we're still popular out here in the West.
I write a lot of stories about the pioneer s- we explore ghost towns - esp. in Nevada. It's of great interest
Good poem
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Gail
