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NaPoWriMo 2019

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National Poetry Writing Month

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Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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Hi Alicia,

Hope you're enjoying Florida. WiFi ... something we get so dependent on. When we don't have it or it's not working properly we feel lost. Your poem is something that we all can relate well to.

Hugs,
Connie

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Hi Connie! South Florida was a nice change. I should plan a few daytrips for the summer. Cars have WiFi. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Joan E.
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Good for you to persist in posting your NaPoWriMo entries despite limited internet. I actually did not know that WiFi means Wireless Fidelity! Thanks for the clever acrostic and artwork selection. Enjoy Florida- Joan

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Hi Joan! Thank you. Summer daytrip planning appears to be in order now. Happy Summer. Hearts & hugs, Alicia
Comment from lyenochka
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I totally understand, Alicia! I am reviewing this now over the airport wifi. Clever of you to communicate your connection issues with this acrostic poem.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Hi! I think airports have wifi spots and chairs now. You'd think such a big place would enable everyone to WiFi. Thank you :)
Comment from Bill Schott
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This acrostic poem, WIFI, follows the vertical format and shines the ligh5. On the WiFi which has revolutionized the way we access and use the internet.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Thank you
    Have a happy & safe 4th of July :)
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Alicia. Yes, WIFI. Hard to imagine life without it now that we're so used to its convenience. A good addition to your NaPoWriMo and I love the image. Very glam. Marilyn

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Thank you :)
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Alicia, I go to Florida a lot...and so many places don't have strong internet...but like you and so many...they would be lost without it...love your poem sweet girl...and love this picture... very nicely written my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Thank you :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a great acrostic, Alicia. I like its message and the way you formatted the lines. The picture is a great pairing, too. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes with your poetry book. Jan

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Thank you :)
Comment from 24chas
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This was a good acrostic, sunnilicious. I think we'd all definitely be lost without our internet connections. Like you are going by your author's notes. Hope it gets better.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Thank you
    Have a happy & safe 4th of July :)