Poetic Treasures and Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Repentance"A book on nature and feelings and spirituality.
5 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written double cinquain. We need to repent from sin and confess not to do the same sins again and again. With God's grace we will be found worthy.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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A very well-written double cinquain. We need to repent from sin and confess not to do the same sins again and again. With God's grace we will be found worthy.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Dear Sandra, Thanks for your review and comments. Dove
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- the impact of this one is truly weighty for those for whom the message is clear... it is also good that one learn to forgive oneself as well. thank you for sharing and best of luck in the this month-long contest! ;)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Wow -- the impact of this one is truly weighty for those for whom the message is clear... it is also good that one learn to forgive oneself as well. thank you for sharing and best of luck in the this month-long contest! ;)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Dear Y.M., Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Tina Crute
You have some amazing phrases. I like...a spiritual gift begins...and breathe freely in freedom. Very nice job on this! You picked a good time to post this as Easter is around the corner!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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You have some amazing phrases. I like...a spiritual gift begins...and breathe freely in freedom. Very nice job on this! You picked a good time to post this as Easter is around the corner!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Dear Tina, Thank you for your great comments and review. Dove
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You are welcome, friend!!
Comment from Mistydawn
Your poem is very well-written, your great word choice gets your message across nicely and your artwork is lovely, perfect for the poem. You taught me something new, too. I didn't know that April is the month of the Holy Spirit for the Catholic religion. It makes sense of course. Nice job.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Your poem is very well-written, your great word choice gets your message across nicely and your artwork is lovely, perfect for the poem. You taught me something new, too. I didn't know that April is the month of the Holy Spirit for the Catholic religion. It makes sense of course. Nice job.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Dear Mistydawn, Thank you for your comments, compliments and review. I'm glad I was able to teach you something new. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well April certainly seems to be the month in which to carry out the instructions in your poem! I suspect many find this a hard journey, including myself, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Well April certainly seems to be the month in which to carry out the instructions in your poem! I suspect many find this a hard journey, including myself, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. One of my therapists said once, "You've had a hard life, Donna. Nothing has come easy to you." How right he was! Love, Donna x