Poetic Treasures and Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Spring Rains"A book on nature and feelings and spirituality.
3 total reviews
Comment from samantha0930
Lol, when you first look at it, an ice cream farm sounds really silly, although it's probably just a special farm where all the cows' milk is used for ice cream, right?
I like the poem, and think it's done well for how short it has to be.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Lol, when you first look at it, an ice cream farm sounds really silly, although it's probably just a special farm where all the cows' milk is used for ice cream, right?
I like the poem, and think it's done well for how short it has to be.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Dear Samantha, Thank you for your comments and review. I work at an ice cream stand that also has a grill where they cook hamburgers, hotdogs, and seafood. They serve alcohol and soft drinks too. I work outside, under the tents and the trees, doing maintenance. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes Spring promises rain and thunder will certainly bring the rainbow afterwards if we are lucky, always make a wish then, a delightful read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Yes Spring promises rain and thunder will certainly bring the rainbow afterwards if we are lucky, always make a wish then, a delightful read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna x
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Dovemarie. I liked the flow of it and the imagery you used. The artwork was definitely enhanced by your work. Good job of writing.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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This was a good read, Dovemarie. I liked the flow of it and the imagery you used. The artwork was definitely enhanced by your work. Good job of writing.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Dear 24chas, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
