Perpetual Sunshine
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a beautiful presentation Yvette, I love the sentiments and laughter certainly lifts our spirites and if you smile, the whole world smiles back at you, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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This is a beautiful presentation Yvette, I love the sentiments and laughter certainly lifts our spirites and if you smile, the whole world smiles back at you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Dolly. :) :)Yvette
Comment from susand3022
Well, aren't you in just the happy mood today! :) This is a bright cheery poem, I love it!
On the topic of poems, I have a question for you...
I was challenged recently, to do the "odd-even-reverse" ... I thought that was a cool one... you know I'm always up for a challenge too! ;)
Problem is, the person who challenged me to do it, then got all up in my face trying to get me to do something that I didn't want to do because I was uncomfortable with the idea and so called me a bunch of names and won't talk to me anymore... (hahaha... that I could care less about... someone wants to act 12, let them.)
So, I wrote the poem... I was a little upset at the time... It's about listening to someone and not trying to change people to suit yourself. It came out really well.
I want to post it... I don't want to post it... I want to because it's good, I don't want to be seen as a bitch... but it's good and everyone always says they want to see what's 'raw' ... well, this is raw all right...
What do I do??????
Help me My Lady of the South! :)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Well, aren't you in just the happy mood today! :) This is a bright cheery poem, I love it!
On the topic of poems, I have a question for you...
I was challenged recently, to do the "odd-even-reverse" ... I thought that was a cool one... you know I'm always up for a challenge too! ;)
Problem is, the person who challenged me to do it, then got all up in my face trying to get me to do something that I didn't want to do because I was uncomfortable with the idea and so called me a bunch of names and won't talk to me anymore... (hahaha... that I could care less about... someone wants to act 12, let them.)
So, I wrote the poem... I was a little upset at the time... It's about listening to someone and not trying to change people to suit yourself. It came out really well.
I want to post it... I don't want to post it... I want to because it's good, I don't want to be seen as a bitch... but it's good and everyone always says they want to see what's 'raw' ... well, this is raw all right...
What do I do??????
Help me My Lady of the South! :)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Yeah, well, I learned a long time ago that even if life's not all sunshine and roses, you should keep on smiling and have them all wondering what you're up to (or at least what you know that they don't, yeah?) :) :) Sometimes a smile and a laugh gets under suspicious folks' skin more than silence....LOVE IT!! :) :) Here's sending some paint and few extra accents your way! :) ;) Take care and have a great week! :) Yvette
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Hahahahaha!!! Love it!!! Never let 'em see you sweat... and keep the little bastards guessing! Lol!
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
I love the sentiment you convey her Yvette. This is a great 1-5-7 and am stumped as to how anyone can do this but you have. Do you separate the stanzas or let them flow as one line? I see you have a flowing line. You found a great photo as well.
We need more laughter in our lives!
Sincerely,
Luv&stuff
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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I love the sentiment you convey her Yvette. This is a great 1-5-7 and am stumped as to how anyone can do this but you have. Do you separate the stanzas or let them flow as one line? I see you have a flowing line. You found a great photo as well.
We need more laughter in our lives!
Sincerely,
Luv&stuff
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Oh, we SO NEED more laughter, L&S -- you could not have said it better. ;) ;) I'm so very glad you enjoyed this one -- I really do try to do this (not always successful, but try-try-again, right?!) Here's sending some paint and few extra accents your way! :) ;) Take care and have a great week! :) Yvette
Comment from tfawcus
You had me looking to see if I could find an accent that looked like a smile. The breve seems to do it! One might also consider the tilde as a lopsided grin!
Love that painting - so full of life and of joy. Your poem echoes it nicely.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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You had me looking to see if I could find an accent that looked like a smile. The breve seems to do it! One might also consider the tilde as a lopsided grin!
Love that painting - so full of life and of joy. Your poem echoes it nicely.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for you wonderful comments, Tony -- you see, you spread a few accents of your own because I am grinning like a Cheshire cat over here! :) :) I so appreciate your stopping in for the review, sir -- here's sending some paint and few extra accents your way! :) ;) Take care and have a great week! :) Yvette
Comment from Debra White
Hi Yvette :)
This is such a great entry for the contest.
Perfect syllable count and beautifully presented.
Laughter is contagious and this poem of yours certainly spreads the feel-good!
Good Luck.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Hi Yvette :)
This is such a great entry for the contest.
Perfect syllable count and beautifully presented.
Laughter is contagious and this poem of yours certainly spreads the feel-good!
Good Luck.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for you wonderful comments and for stopping in for the review, Debra -- here's sending some paint and few extra accents your way! :) ;) Take care and have a great week! :) Yvette
Comment from Dean Kuch
What a wonderful sentiment you've expressed here, Yvette.
It's often been said that laughter is the best medicine for what ails ya.
Personally, I always feel much better when I laugh.
Good 1-5-7.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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What a wonderful sentiment you've expressed here, Yvette.
It's often been said that laughter is the best medicine for what ails ya.
Personally, I always feel much better when I laugh.
Good 1-5-7.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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I'm glad you enjoyed this one, Sir Dean -- and thanx for the little laughing emoji-guy!! :) I hope this finds you back to 105% and that Gidget is keeping you busy! :) Please know that attached to this email is a little extra paint and lots and lots of accents for you to share -- LOL! :) ;) Take care up there in the O-Hi-O and have a great week! :) ;) Yvette
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You're welcome and you do the same.
Comment from JudyE
So, so true and I love this! Some of these really short poems leave me a bit cold but this really is 'poetic', I guess that's the word. And a great sentiment to live a life by. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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So, so true and I love this! Some of these really short poems leave me a bit cold but this really is 'poetic', I guess that's the word. And a great sentiment to live a life by. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Oh, I'm so glad this one made you smile, Judy -- that is certainly it's purpose on paper! :) ;) LOL! As always, I appreciate your stopping in for the review -- and I've attached more paint to last you the rest of the week - LOL!! :) ;) Take care and have a great week! :) Yvette
Comment from meeshu
I'm not sure which came first, the photograph or the poetry but it doesn't matter. they are a perfect match. good luck, my dear dude................meeshu
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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I'm not sure which came first, the photograph or the poetry but it doesn't matter. they are a perfect match. good luck, my dear dude................meeshu
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Thanx for taking the time on this one, Dude -- know you're swamped (not that a swamp is a thing out there -- LOL!) with your work on the next book! :) ;) Take care and have a great week, sir! :) Vette
Comment from poetwatch
You know Yvette, I was going to write for this contest but I didn't like what I wrote, now, I'm glad I didn't. :) This smile is for you for your words are speaking to my soul. ;) This is a good entry for the 1-5-7 Poem contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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You know Yvette, I was going to write for this contest but I didn't like what I wrote, now, I'm glad I didn't. :) This smile is for you for your words are speaking to my soul. ;) This is a good entry for the 1-5-7 Poem contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Wow, Jose!! You just put a smile in my heart for the day, sir -- thank you so much for these shiny stars and wonderful comments!! :) ;) May your soul keep smiling on through the Spring!! :) ;) Take care and have a great week! :) Yvette
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL, Mystery Writer! These are PERFECT words of inspiration and joy. I wish you such luck in the contest, but I'm thinking you don't need it. You'll do so very well with this lovely entry. xo
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Absolutely BEAUTIFUL, Mystery Writer! These are PERFECT words of inspiration and joy. I wish you such luck in the contest, but I'm thinking you don't need it. You'll do so very well with this lovely entry. xo
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Thanx for you wishes of luck, Rachelle, although I'm not a mystery (although my husband may argue that point)!! ;) ;) I so appreciate your stopping in for the review -- always so good to hear that smile in your pen! :) ;) Take care and have a great week! :) Yvette
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Hahaha. Good one, Yvette! I couldn't remember if this WAS or WASN'T a blind entry, so I erred on the side of caution. xo
