Painful Recollections
So much that now will never be...15 total reviews
Comment from Randa Dayle
Very nice 5-7-5. I think you have a great contest entry. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. May you continue writing and sharing with us! Good luck1
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Very nice 5-7-5. I think you have a great contest entry. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. May you continue writing and sharing with us! Good luck1
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Randa. 😉👍
Comment from LIJ Red
Counts a good five seven five, an excellent poem, although it is about
memories, kaleidoscopes and broken hearts, and the envelope is stretched a bit to find "lost", it is all in there.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Counts a good five seven five, an excellent poem, although it is about
memories, kaleidoscopes and broken hearts, and the envelope is stretched a bit to find "lost", it is all in there.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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I like to 'stretch the envelope', LlJ -- otherwise, where's the adventure in life?! LOL! LOL! Thanx for stopping by! ;) :)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Mystery Writer,
Indeed, some memories are a "kaleidoscope of lost dreams." What an interesting and creative phrase. Paints a wonderful picture of contemplation for the reader.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Hello, Mystery Writer,
Indeed, some memories are a "kaleidoscope of lost dreams." What an interesting and creative phrase. Paints a wonderful picture of contemplation for the reader.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for your review, Lady D! :) ;) Think we've all got some favorite kaleidoscopes we like to pull out every now and then...! :) ;)
Comment from 24chas
This was a good write. I really loved the flow of it and the message in it. You made a good point about how memories are not always pleasant, but they do shape us. Good job.
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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This was a good write. I really loved the flow of it and the message in it. You made a good point about how memories are not always pleasant, but they do shape us. Good job.
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review! :)
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Awww, such a sad poem you've composed. This is a great contest entry. Nice visual effect. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan :-)
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Awww, such a sad poem you've composed. This is a great contest entry. Nice visual effect. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan :-)
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thanx for your review on this one, Jan -- much appreciated, my friend! :) ;)
