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5/7/5 Poem on Lost

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Screens, has the right set up and seems to warn against the invasion of electronic stimuli which deadens independent thought.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
    Yes indeed -thanks for reading zanya
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Contest Author,

Very good point you make here, and a valid one. Kids now, at least in high schools, are talking in acronyms, short circuiting even more of their brains. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
    Yes an issue for our times ! zanya
Comment from Gail Denham
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This is truly a problem today - it worries me when I see our grandkids especially with their nose pointed down at the screen. Yet my husband with his smart phone spends a lot of time looking down too. However, there are times when that smart phone comes in handy.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
    Yes an issue for our childrens' children especially zanya