Lost in Time
Time passes and one can get lost in memories.6 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Brigitte, Good job with the syllable count per line, the choice of art, and the meaningful words (about you thinking of your daughter, perhaps), Thank you for sharing. Take care. Jan
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Brigitte, Good job with the syllable count per line, the choice of art, and the meaningful words (about you thinking of your daughter, perhaps), Thank you for sharing. Take care. Jan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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You really understood this, thank you. I appreciate your kind words.
Brigitte
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Lost in Time, has the right set up and finds enough time in the day to relive highs and lows that bring us to today.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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This 5-7-5, Lost in Time, has the right set up and finds enough time in the day to relive highs and lows that bring us to today.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this supportive review. I appreciate the time you took to read.
Have a great day!
Brigitte
Comment from dragonpoet
The artwork is perfect for the poem with its fogginess and the clock.
Memories are always both happy and sad. Sometimes it is good to
remember as long as you don't live in the past.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing.
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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The artwork is perfect for the poem with its fogginess and the clock.
Memories are always both happy and sad. Sometimes it is good to
remember as long as you don't live in the past.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing.
Joan
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this supportive review. I appreciate the time you took to read.
Have a great day!
Brigitte
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You are most kindly welcome, Brigitte.
Joan
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I enjoyed your candid poem, "Lost in Time", and your thoughts on "as time passes we can get lost in our memories". I believe people do this more as they age, which is part of our developmental process.
Excellent contest entry,
Deborah
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Dear Author,
I enjoyed your candid poem, "Lost in Time", and your thoughts on "as time passes we can get lost in our memories". I believe people do this more as they age, which is part of our developmental process.
Excellent contest entry,
Deborah
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this supportive review. I appreciate the time you took to read. Memories can be haunting or refreshing. And...I am getting old,lol.
Have a great day!
Brigitte
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Thank you and have a great week.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is what we do, hang onto our old memories, hide our tears and keep our smiles, our bitter sweet thoughts can lay heavy on our hearts, a fine 'five seven five' love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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This is what we do, hang onto our old memories, hide our tears and keep our smiles, our bitter sweet thoughts can lay heavy on our hearts, a fine 'five seven five' love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this supportive review. I appreciate the time you took to read. Memories can be haunting or refreshing.
Have a great day!
Brigitte
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read. I think we all have moments of recollection and reflection about the past and this really captures that moment. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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This was a good read. I think we all have moments of recollection and reflection about the past and this really captures that moment. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this supportive review. I appreciate the time you took to read. Memories can be haunting or refreshing.
Have a great day!
Brigitte
