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Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Easter Bonnet"Eclectic style
10 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Gorgeous artwork Trisha, to compliment your Nove Otto poem. I do like the distance between the rhyme lines, makes it easier to read. A very timely topic the Easter bonnet parade.Lovely cheerful read,
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Gorgeous artwork Trisha, to compliment your Nove Otto poem. I do like the distance between the rhyme lines, makes it easier to read. A very timely topic the Easter bonnet parade.Lovely cheerful read,
cheers
valda
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your complimentary review validation
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nove Otto for the potlatch club, very well presented with great rhyming and the poem has a perfect topic for this time of the year.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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A very well-written Nove Otto for the potlatch club, very well presented with great rhyming and the poem has a perfect topic for this time of the year.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Sandra thank you for your very complimentary review. I?m honored!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
The more blooms the better - LOL! :) ;) I absolutely love hats at Easter and all the time!! :) ;) Thanx for sharing such a lovely and bright Easter poem this morning, Trisha -- you are definitely the lady of the many poetic styles this month! :) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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The more blooms the better - LOL! :) ;) I absolutely love hats at Easter and all the time!! :) ;) Thanx for sharing such a lovely and bright Easter poem this morning, Trisha -- you are definitely the lady of the many poetic styles this month! :) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Yes, because my blooms are fading LOL! It is a beautiful picture, thank you very much for your loyal reviewing
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Reminding me of the song here, your Easter bonnet sounds so stunning that I think it will be an amazing addition in the parade. I have made many Easter bonnets through the years and I have photos of a few of them, a delight read, well presented too, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Reminding me of the song here, your Easter bonnet sounds so stunning that I think it will be an amazing addition in the parade. I have made many Easter bonnets through the years and I have photos of a few of them, a delight read, well presented too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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I remember that song quite well! Thanks for a great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
I miss the days when women wore pretty hats. Not many do anymore. You did a good job with the Nove Otto.
Good rhyme and beautiful photo. Thanks for participating in the club.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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I miss the days when women wore pretty hats. Not many do anymore. You did a good job with the Nove Otto.
Good rhyme and beautiful photo. Thanks for participating in the club.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your great review! I have a fun time writing with the clubs
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with the nove otto style, Bucketlist. I enjoyed reading your poem. The picture is super. Your words are fun to read and very descriptive. I like the color scheme, too. Thanks for sharing such a timely poem. Jan
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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You did a great job with the nove otto style, Bucketlist. I enjoyed reading your poem. The picture is super. Your words are fun to read and very descriptive. I like the color scheme, too. Thanks for sharing such a timely poem. Jan
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank YOU very much for the challenge of different style poetry. You?ve brought an educational fun experience to me via the club.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Tina Crute
This is lovely! What a perfect time to post this! You did a great job with the rhyme scheme. It didn't feel forced, but smooth and pretty. Good job on this style!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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This is lovely! What a perfect time to post this! You did a great job with the rhyme scheme. It didn't feel forced, but smooth and pretty. Good job on this style!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Many thanks, your complimentary review was appreciated I?m glad you enjoyed my poem
Hugs, Trisha
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You are
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Can't wait to
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Now that?s pressure! Thank you for the compliment
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Haha...you
can do it!
Comment from Judy Swanson
Delightful. Brings back memories of childhood and shopping for the Easter bonnet each year. And of that old song, "In your Easter Bonnet, with all the frills upon it..." You did a fine job us using the Nove Otto style to pen this one. The artwork enhances the imagery of the poem.
Judy
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Delightful. Brings back memories of childhood and shopping for the Easter bonnet each year. And of that old song, "In your Easter Bonnet, with all the frills upon it..." You did a fine job us using the Nove Otto style to pen this one. The artwork enhances the imagery of the poem.
Judy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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You made my afternoon more pleasant, with your memories and the review. I remember those Easters. Thank you
Hugs Trisha
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You are welcome - and hugs back to you! Judy
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Bucket,
What a lovely poem, accimpanied by an equally beautiful image! That lovely hat would not only weigh a ton, but would have bees buzzing around one's head. Ha ha! Thanks for sharing your work. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Hi Bucket,
What a lovely poem, accimpanied by an equally beautiful image! That lovely hat would not only weigh a ton, but would have bees buzzing around one's head. Ha ha! Thanks for sharing your work. Jan :-)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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I love that picture, full of femininity and grace. Thanks for your amusing review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from tfawcus
A splendid Easter bonnet and a very fine poem to go with it! Good Nove Otto form, though I think Lines 2 and 3 might be a syllable short. Not something to worry about though, as they sound fine when read aloud.
Now all you need to do is to write the sonnet! LOL
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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A splendid Easter bonnet and a very fine poem to go with it! Good Nove Otto form, though I think Lines 2 and 3 might be a syllable short. Not something to worry about though, as they sound fine when read aloud.
Now all you need to do is to write the sonnet! LOL
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Bingo! But I can?t give you another nomination, just my sincere thanks for kindly reviewing
my penning
Hugs, Trisha