With Me 'Til the End
Even when its hard to keep believing, something holds on...10 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
With so much evil in the world, and with so much sickness and heartache, sometimes it is indeed a strain on 'belief.' However, our heart does, in fact, cling to faith and 'hope.' Hope being the assurance of what is not seen.
This is an excellent poem of unyielding faith through good times and bad.
Excellent contest entry!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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With so much evil in the world, and with so much sickness and heartache, sometimes it is indeed a strain on 'belief.' However, our heart does, in fact, cling to faith and 'hope.' Hope being the assurance of what is not seen.
This is an excellent poem of unyielding faith through good times and bad.
Excellent contest entry!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
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It was truly beautiful :)
Comment from misscookie
Due to my illness I missed so many of my fan lists writes.. I trying to catch up now even though some are very late.
I love the artwork you choose to goes with your write, it is a perfect match
I just wrote a poem on the same subject.
I hope you get a chance to read my poems even though it's late.
thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Due to my illness I missed so many of my fan lists writes.. I trying to catch up now even though some are very late.
I love the artwork you choose to goes with your write, it is a perfect match
I just wrote a poem on the same subject.
I hope you get a chance to read my poems even though it's late.
thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Cookie. :)Yvette
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your so welcome.
Cookie
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Hello R.K. I wanted to give you a six but they only gave me two. I was on this site years ago and they must have changed the rules.
This is a perfect use of this form as well as a beautiful statement of faith. Great choice in the final stanza with the word unyielding! Best of luck with this powerful piece.
Luv&stuff
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Hello R.K. I wanted to give you a six but they only gave me two. I was on this site years ago and they must have changed the rules.
This is a perfect use of this form as well as a beautiful statement of faith. Great choice in the final stanza with the word unyielding! Best of luck with this powerful piece.
Luv&stuff
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, LnS! :) :) You've really been the highlight of my night down here in Dixie -- thank you! :) ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written faith 5-7-5 poem. Sometimes it is hard to believe but the faith never goes away completely, there will be a day that we believe again in the impossible.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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A very well-written faith 5-7-5 poem. Sometimes it is hard to believe but the faith never goes away completely, there will be a day that we believe again in the impossible.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, Sandra --- so many looking for it to only apply to religion, when that was only one aspect of it... :) ;) thanx for the review! :) ;Yvette :)
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Excellent! Thoughtful and thought stirring "definition" of faith. I like the comparison faith/belief as some people do not distinguish one from another
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Excellent! Thoughtful and thought stirring "definition" of faith. I like the comparison faith/belief as some people do not distinguish one from another
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Donka - much appreciated! ;)
Comment from Janilou
belief fades with time
while faith resides in the heart,
its hold unyielding
It does indeed. Well written and well said.
No errors found and no edits to suggest. All the very best.
Jan
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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belief fades with time
while faith resides in the heart,
its hold unyielding
It does indeed. Well written and well said.
No errors found and no edits to suggest. All the very best.
Jan
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review! :)
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
This is a very nicely written religious poem, but your words can work well in human relationships, too. Nothing to suggest revising. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
This is a very nicely written religious poem, but your words can work well in human relationships, too. Nothing to suggest revising. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan :-)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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who says it was religious? :) :) The contest was about faith... not religion. :) Thanx for your review, Jan! ;) :)
Comment from Randa Dayle
What a wonderful faith 5-7-5 poem. Thanks for sharing, and I wish you good luck in the contest. May you continue to share your talents with us! :):) I look forward to it!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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What a wonderful faith 5-7-5 poem. Thanks for sharing, and I wish you good luck in the contest. May you continue to share your talents with us! :):) I look forward to it!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from shaffer40
This is a good 5-7-5 poem that appears clear and without errors. I have wanted to try one of these, but I may not fare as well as you. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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This is a good 5-7-5 poem that appears clear and without errors. I have wanted to try one of these, but I may not fare as well as you. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from kiwijenny
I think of faith and belief as synonymous
I do believe faith it's hold unyielding...holding on forever ...trusting truth holding on
Powerful and strong,
God bless
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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I think of faith and belief as synonymous
I do believe faith it's hold unyielding...holding on forever ...trusting truth holding on
Powerful and strong,
God bless
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
