The Truth I See
The Lord Jesus is my Savior and I try to speak truth.7 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Amen to your author notes. I love the words to your 5-7-5. They represent a strength in your faith; also an invitation. Beautiful artwork; love the scripture across the top.
This is truly a great contest entry :)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Amen to your author notes. I love the words to your 5-7-5. They represent a strength in your faith; also an invitation. Beautiful artwork; love the scripture across the top.
This is truly a great contest entry :)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Thank you Gale. I'm glad you liked it. :)
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Loved it :)
Comment from Joanna S. Blue
I love the second line--"And his words I will write down." This simple declaration is very moving. I will write your poem down in my notebook where I keep such things for their beauty and inspiration. Thanks.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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I love the second line--"And his words I will write down." This simple declaration is very moving. I will write your poem down in my notebook where I keep such things for their beauty and inspiration. Thanks.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you Joana. When and if you write it down omit the "So" in the last line. :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Another beautiful offering for this contest... your presentation is lovely and your message for the word as the foundation of Faith is well-written in the 17 syllables... good luck at the polls! :)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Another beautiful offering for this contest... your presentation is lovely and your message for the word as the foundation of Faith is well-written in the 17 syllables... good luck at the polls! :)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Ah Yvette how come you didn't point out it was 18 syllables. :( Good luck on the contest. :)
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Awww...why did you post it with too many.... :(
Comment from QC Poet
It seems the truth becomes something many people tweek and twist into a narrative to fit an agenda for themselves, God's Blessings to you. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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It seems the truth becomes something many people tweek and twist into a narrative to fit an agenda for themselves, God's Blessings to you. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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The twist and turns are in the eye of the beholder. Yet, truth shall prevail. May God bless you also.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
This is a very nice religious poem but your last line is six, rather than five, syllables. You can easily remedy this by deleting "so" at the beginning of the line. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
This is a very nice religious poem but your last line is six, rather than five, syllables. You can easily remedy this by deleting "so" at the beginning of the line. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Jan, in truth, I missed that! Thank you SO much. Done fixed it. That's what happens when one writes at the moment. :) thank you.
Comment from Sugarray77
Excellent job on this entry for the Faith 5-7-5. I liked reading this one that encourages the reader to place their trust in the Lord and build their lives on His promises. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Excellent job on this entry for the Faith 5-7-5. I liked reading this one that encourages the reader to place their trust in the Lord and build their lives on His promises. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you Melissa. Simplicity is best coming from the heart. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Raul1
I have faith in God and I believe in him. He is watching all of us everywhere and he knows more than we do. This poem is spiritual and touching. Nice work
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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I have faith in God and I believe in him. He is watching all of us everywhere and he knows more than we do. This poem is spiritual and touching. Nice work
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank yo Raul. I'm glad you liked it.
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You're welcome.