Soul of Faith
Good works bring us to God6 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
So, so beautiful!!
The artwork is perfect for this 'faith' poem you have created.
I believe every word and every line of the poem stood out with significant meaning. This is the main reason I love this 5-7-5.
Love your font and your background color, too.
A MOST EXCELLENT contest entry :)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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So, so beautiful!!
The artwork is perfect for this 'faith' poem you have created.
I believe every word and every line of the poem stood out with significant meaning. This is the main reason I love this 5-7-5.
Love your font and your background color, too.
A MOST EXCELLENT contest entry :)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much for your read and your evaluation.
Comment from QC Poet
Second sentence is missing a syllable, otherwise beautifully written and Well thought out visual picturesque verses, with a great photo included with your posting. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Second sentence is missing a syllable, otherwise beautifully written and Well thought out visual picturesque verses, with a great photo included with your posting. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Checked with syllable counter at https://www.howmanysyllables.com/syllable_counter/. It says seven syllables in second sentences. Thanks for the read and the comments.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is absolutely beautiful. I couldn't love it more. These words felt like a healing balm in my heart. So truth in so few syllables. And I love the photo you chose to accentuate it. Good luck in the contest. xo
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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This is absolutely beautiful. I couldn't love it more. These words felt like a healing balm in my heart. So truth in so few syllables. And I love the photo you chose to accentuate it. Good luck in the contest. xo
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Wow, thank you so much for your read and your kind words.
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My pleasure. xo
Comment from Christine Wissner
My read of this is give unto others. Comfort and care for someone other than yourself. We need to do more giving and I want. Having faith in not only Gods word, but in those we love and care for. Thanks for reminding us of the importance of faith. Good job.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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My read of this is give unto others. Comfort and care for someone other than yourself. We need to do more giving and I want. Having faith in not only Gods word, but in those we love and care for. Thanks for reminding us of the importance of faith. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from Rmocruz
you have poetically presented a spiritual message in this correct to format
five-seven-five faith verse. An appropriate artwork choice works to enhance. A promising contest entry, best wishes.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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you have poetically presented a spiritual message in this correct to format
five-seven-five faith verse. An appropriate artwork choice works to enhance. A promising contest entry, best wishes.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
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You're welcome, my pleasure.
Comment from Raul1
It takes a lot of practice to be for who you want to be when you grow up. Nothing is ever easy and most things are hard. Interesting poem. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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It takes a lot of practice to be for who you want to be when you grow up. Nothing is ever easy and most things are hard. Interesting poem. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
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You're welcome