Accidental Hitchhiker
It takes one willing spirit to move another...28 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
A chilling experience. Love the way you have constructed the dialogue. You've certainly given this shopper something to think about as she drives home!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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A chilling experience. Love the way you have constructed the dialogue. You've certainly given this shopper something to think about as she drives home!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thanx for your review on this one, Tony -- this one was a bit different, but I like to try new things once in a while! :) ;) Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from damommy
That certainly raised the hair on the back of my neck! And I read it just before bedtime. Can I come to your house tonight?
You did a great job showing all that in just 100 words. It sounds like she was killed in the parking lot when going to view her brother's remains. Creepy!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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That certainly raised the hair on the back of my neck! And I read it just before bedtime. Can I come to your house tonight?
You did a great job showing all that in just 100 words. It sounds like she was killed in the parking lot when going to view her brother's remains. Creepy!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thanx for taking the time to review this one, Yvonne -- really apprciate it! :) ;) It's a bit different than my usual, but gotta try new things once in a while! :) :) Yvette
Comment from Tina Crute
You had so much happen in a few short words. This is so interesting! I found myself reading quickly so I could see what this character was up to, and nice surprise ending! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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You had so much happen in a few short words. This is so interesting! I found myself reading quickly so I could see what this character was up to, and nice surprise ending! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed, Tina -- thanx for stopping in!! :) ;) It was a bit of a different twist for me.. :) :) Take care, ma'am! :) Yvette
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Comment from lyenochka
Ooooh. A spooky one! Well told and because of the reduced speech we have no clue what she looked like in bodily form. I wasn't sure at first if it were human or a bug. But since you opened the car door...and Poof! Great job, Yvette!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Ooooh. A spooky one! Well told and because of the reduced speech we have no clue what she looked like in bodily form. I wasn't sure at first if it were human or a bug. But since you opened the car door...and Poof! Great job, Yvette!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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LOL! Glad you enjoyed this one, Helen -- it was different and fun! :) ;) Thanx and take care, ma'am! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Christine Wissner
Oh my! Thank you for this story. Unusual and impressive. I liked it. Keep up the good work. Not long but straight to the point. I've heard of other ghost stories in real life. Makes one wonder what is real and what is not.
Good work.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Oh my! Thank you for this story. Unusual and impressive. I liked it. Keep up the good work. Not long but straight to the point. I've heard of other ghost stories in real life. Makes one wonder what is real and what is not.
Good work.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thanx for your review on this one, Chrisitine -- this one was a bit different, but I like to try new things once in a while! :) ;) Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
You wrote a script idea for Alfred Hitchcock or Sterling's Twilight Zone. Great twist for your conclusion.
Just realized your pun for the name of the grocery store and Morrigan!
You really don't speak that way ? It is only your 'gud' spelling one should question. LOL Apparently, Uber was unavailable in this town.
Mark
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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You wrote a script idea for Alfred Hitchcock or Sterling's Twilight Zone. Great twist for your conclusion.
Just realized your pun for the name of the grocery store and Morrigan!
You really don't speak that way ? It is only your 'gud' spelling one should question. LOL Apparently, Uber was unavailable in this town.
Mark
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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LOL! :) Thanx for your review on this one, Mark -- this one was a bit different, but I like to try new things once in a while! :) ;) And the 'talking' thing? Yes, I do get folks correcting my spelling so, I just kindof headed it off at the pass! :) Yvette
Comment from Mrs. KT
Jee-zus, Yvette!
I read your story three times! And you can be certain that I shall be sleeping with the light on tonite! Loved it!
Gave me the "wing-wangs."
Wish I had six stars, but knowing that I am terrified should be suitable compensation! Love ya!
diane
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Jee-zus, Yvette!
I read your story three times! And you can be certain that I shall be sleeping with the light on tonite! Loved it!
Gave me the "wing-wangs."
Wish I had six stars, but knowing that I am terrified should be suitable compensation! Love ya!
diane
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Oh, I'm so glad to see your reaction was good, Diane -- this one was a bit different, and I wasn't really sure about it! :) ;) Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from patcelaw
This was a good story and the spelling was not a bother to me as I knew you were speaking as it might have happened with the lady. May your weekend be blessed.
Patricia
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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This was a good story and the spelling was not a bother to me as I knew you were speaking as it might have happened with the lady. May your weekend be blessed.
Patricia
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thanx for your review on this one, Patricia -- this one was a bit different, but I like to try new things once in a while! :) ;) Take care! :) Yvette
