God's Presence
God's light shines upon us.4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes, God is in the light of the sun at the beginning of the day and the moon and stars at the end. All light is hope
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
Yes, God is in the light of the sun at the beginning of the day and the moon and stars at the end. All light is hope
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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God keeps me strong and life goes on. Thank you for reading and your kind words.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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Don't mention it. Faith does keep you strong.
Have a good week.
Joan
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-5-7, God's Presence, has the syllables in the right place and acknowledges the bright, sunny orb as the welcoming beacon to a new and promising day. Nice.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
This 1-5-7, God's Presence, has the syllables in the right place and acknowledges the bright, sunny orb as the welcoming beacon to a new and promising day. Nice.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this complimentary review. I appreciate your time.
Have a blessed day!
Brigitte
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Super visual and lovely words. Sometimes less is really more. I'm not a poet, but we rely on poets to move us with their words. Good work and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
Super visual and lovely words. Sometimes less is really more. I'm not a poet, but we rely on poets to move us with their words. Good work and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this complimentary review. I appreciate your time.
Have a blessed day!
Brigitte
Comment from Joy Graham
This is a very nice message and picture. I love those doors with stained glass above them :) Nice sunbeams to warm in just like cats love their sunbeams for afternoon naps. Good syllable count in each line. Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
This is a very nice message and picture. I love those doors with stained glass above them :) Nice sunbeams to warm in just like cats love their sunbeams for afternoon naps. Good syllable count in each line. Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this complimentary review. I appreciate your time. Yes, cats love those sunshine beams.
Have a blessed day!
Brigitte