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Poetic Treasures and Dreams

Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Children on a Swing"
A book on nature and feelings and spirituality.

3 total reviews 
Comment from ~Dovey
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Hi Donna -
The last line of this piece is so powerful. It really brings the entire poem home to the heart. What a beautiful job you have done.

Kim

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    Dear Kim, Thank you for your comments and review, and compliment. Donna
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Excellent writing to express mothers' desire for their handicapped child to have as much freedom and enjoyment as possible in life. Swinging is a great, practical way to accomplish that. Great idea and thanks for sharing! Bill

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
    Dear Bill, Thank you for your comments and review. Dovemarie (you can just call me Dove)
reply by Bill Pinder on 08-Apr-2019
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Dove,

Wow - Surprise ending there. I had to go back and re-read the poem to see what I missed. Lol

Nothing to revise here.

Thanks for sharing.

Jan :-)

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
    Dear Jan, Thank you for your comments and review. I think I surprised myself with that ending! Dove