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Poetic Treasures and Dreams

Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Put God First"
A book on nature and feelings and spirituality.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Pinder
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I like how you expressed your faith in this writing about the struggle involved in always putting God first. Sometimes life seems to have a good flow to it, and sometimes there is so much chaos involved that it does seem like you're fighting a curse. Thanks for sharing! Bill

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
    Dear Bill, Thank you for your comments and review. Dovemarie
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I agree with your sentiments, I liked your end rhymes, worst, thirst, cloudburst, cursed, immersed and first, much enjoyed, best wishes . . . . love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
    Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna x
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Dove,

This is a well written religious poem. Your strong relugious beliefs are evident in virtually every line.

Nothing to revise here, as your verse flows well.

Thanks for sharing.

Jan

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
    Dear Jan, Your name HealingMuse gives me healing, you always write me kind reviews, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove