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NaPoWriMo 2019

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National Poetry Writing Month

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Comment from l.raven
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Hi Alicia, I love nature as well...and I
am a big animal lover...if we don't wake up
soon and clean up this country...it will truly
be to late...I love your poem...has a great message to be
heard...very well written ...picture and colors
perfect...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
    Hi Linda! You're so nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
reply by l.raven on 06-Apr-2019
    and so are you...thank you for your kind words sweet girl...and you...are always so welcome...big smiles...love you...xxoo
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Alicia. Earth day continues after all these years. We can all do our part by reaching a hand to those in our circle. Even though we can't reach millions, we may reach some. A nicely expressed piece and thank you for sharing your poem for Day #4. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    thank you. hugs :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written uplifting poem. Let us make a sad song better by being optimistic and tackle problems in a positivie matter, don't let the troubles of the world get us down.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    thank you. hugs :)
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank your focusing on optimism, especially inspired by the renewal of spring and memories of the popular song from the 70's. I enjoyed your rhymes and "hugs". (I think "I'd rather hug a tree" lost its contraction.) Here's to protecting and respecting the Earth! More hugs- Joan

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    you're nice. thank you. hugs :)
Comment from 24chas
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This was a good read, sunnilicious. It had a good flow and imagery and I really liked the message. The video was fun to see, I haven't heard that song in a long time. One small nit: I (I'd) rather hug a tree;

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    I appreciate the edit note. Thank you :)
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Sunni,

I love that you honor Nature with this poem. This is a great way to remind people about Earth Day! Nothing for me suggest you consider revising. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Thank you :)
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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This is a well-written poem, my friend. I think it is well-worded with excellent flow and makes a good point. I would suggest:

I rather hug a tree; (I'd rather hug a tree)~Debbie

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    I appreciate the edit note. Thank you :)
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Some times it just takes one small thing, like picking up trash when you go for a walk, to make a huge change. We all need to do our part, like not throwing trash out our car windows, (I want to smack people who do that), and recycle, to help preserve our world. Hope you do well in the contest. rox

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    You're nice. Littering is a terrible thing. I haven't seen it. Noise pollution is around me. Thank you :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It is difficult for one person to change the world, but not impossible, and you can easily change the world of others on a daily basis, one smile can uplift someone else's day and make a difference, you made a difference here with your poem, you gave mea new perspective, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
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What a great message, Alicia! I think that would be a life changer not only to give hugs but to honor and respect Nature and teach children to do the same.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
    Hi! I'm not married with child yet. But if you have children, teach... Toss trash in the bin, Don't smoke, Love plants, Earplugs, etc... Thank you :)