Rhyme Without Coffee
A day without caffeine is just not worth living.26 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
Excellent rhyming poem about coffee. I don't know if the contest is over or not but i would certainly vote for this poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Excellent rhyming poem about coffee. I don't know if the contest is over or not but i would certainly vote for this poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from James Upshaw
I like this poem. I like the concept. Especially I like the idea of drinking coffee for the protection of others. I really relate to that. It does rhyme. I see no error.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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I like this poem. I like the concept. Especially I like the idea of drinking coffee for the protection of others. I really relate to that. It does rhyme. I see no error.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Possummagic
It's an interesting poem about coffee. I am not a coffee drinker but I do enjoy a cup of tea. Coffee makes my heart trip, trip, trip faster and in my opinion has a bitter taste but each to his own. It seems that many are slaves to the coffee grinder... nicely written. PM
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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It's an interesting poem about coffee. I am not a coffee drinker but I do enjoy a cup of tea. Coffee makes my heart trip, trip, trip faster and in my opinion has a bitter taste but each to his own. It seems that many are slaves to the coffee grinder... nicely written. PM
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you!
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You?re welcome.PM
Comment from Glowplug
Good tight writing, and thoughtful with the blurry pic. Definitely a popular opinion concerning "caffeine" before life begins. Also, who doesn't want it fresh!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Good tight writing, and thoughtful with the blurry pic. Definitely a popular opinion concerning "caffeine" before life begins. Also, who doesn't want it fresh!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from His Grayness
This rhyming poem does well and certainly finds a lot of common interest from men (and perhaps women) who really love their coffee as much as I do anyway! I enjoyed it very much and thank this author for a very delightful read! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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This rhyming poem does well and certainly finds a lot of common interest from men (and perhaps women) who really love their coffee as much as I do anyway! I enjoyed it very much and thank this author for a very delightful read! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review and comments. I've gotten nice feedback from both men and women.
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my joy LANCE....VANCE!
Comment from babykoala
I love this humorous and very clever little poem. I loved the opening statement of " I drink Java for the protection of others" lol, this made me giggle.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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I love this humorous and very clever little poem. I loved the opening statement of " I drink Java for the protection of others" lol, this made me giggle.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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I'm glad I made you laugh...that was my goal. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Gail Denham
First thing in the morning - we head to the hot pot, brew with good half/half caffeine and non - then the day begins to look brighter - our brain has a re-charge.
Good poem - for sure get GOOD coffee when you go shopping. And now and then stop at a kiosk.
Good job.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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First thing in the morning - we head to the hot pot, brew with good half/half caffeine and non - then the day begins to look brighter - our brain has a re-charge.
Good poem - for sure get GOOD coffee when you go shopping. And now and then stop at a kiosk.
Good job.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from moongirlwriter
Yes, I do get that and I've often thought of roasting my own beans too. Nice work of describing what life would be like without coffee. The best of luck.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Yes, I do get that and I've often thought of roasting my own beans too. Nice work of describing what life would be like without coffee. The best of luck.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Thank you!!
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:)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
We all relate, who drink the cup of you know what. It is such a panacea in the morning when you're foggy and stumbling and you finally drink the liquid you are craving a calm flows over and around and life is once again worth living. I like your poem.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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We all relate, who drink the cup of you know what. It is such a panacea in the morning when you're foggy and stumbling and you finally drink the liquid you are craving a calm flows over and around and life is once again worth living. I like your poem.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem vividly conveys the theme of coffee's necessity and unique greatness! Been drinking it for fifty years and consider
it worth fighting for!! :-)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Your ultra-concise poem vividly conveys the theme of coffee's necessity and unique greatness! Been drinking it for fifty years and consider
it worth fighting for!! :-)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Thank you!!
