Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

This is a great choice for the trains topic, the many and varied train tracks life takes us on, including the long dark tunnels that come along. Liked that comparison and enjoyed the read.
cheers.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019

God's Blessings to you and Thank You for your time to read and review.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I do like your analogy of a train ride for life and you used a lot of train metaphors for life events from the tracks, bridges, stations. I like how you encourage faith and prayer to ride this train of life well.
Suggestion:
"with their own lives problems on their brain."
maybe:
"with their own life's problems on their brain."
or:
"with their own lives' problems on their brain."

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019

Thank you for the review, will correct the grammatical errors according. Thank you for the guidance.

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi G.,

This is a great write for your free verse club. I don't think it is a contest but, if it is, good luck! Nothing to fix here. Don't you wish we could duck when life throws us curve balls? Thanks for a great read. Jan

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019

Thank you for the review and positive encouragement.

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was a good read, gmartinez 247. The flow of this piece was really good and the imagery was really cool as well. The rhyme scheme gave it a smooth and easy readability. Good job.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019

Thank you for the review and time to read as well as the positive encouragement.