Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "Faith"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
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Comment from dragonpoet
I love monarchs. You found a great picture of one to illustrate your
poem. Instincts and nature are a good guide for actions. I don't think anyone can outstay their welcome here.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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I love monarchs. You found a great picture of one to illustrate your
poem. Instincts and nature are a good guide for actions. I don't think anyone can outstay their welcome here.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Awww... Thanks, Joan. I meant I was leaving my old job, not FanStory. But thanks! I'm glad to stay on FanStory. Actually, more like returning to the fold. I've been away from FanStory for about 1.5 years.
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You're welcome, Aiona. Well I hope you find a new job that makes you feel the same way as you do on fanstory.
Joan.
Comment from susand3022
Hi Aiona, Yes, they do at that! Do you know they all end up at the same place, roughly? Some place in South America... must be Monarch Central. Then they all fly north, like Salmon I suppose... I don't get it. Why not stay down south where it's nice and warm... and bask in it. ;)
On the next topic... I don't know how old you are, not that old I think, but I do think it's time to spread those wings! Of course you must take us with you because you can't say goodbye to us! I've had enough of that for a while! :)
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Hi Aiona, Yes, they do at that! Do you know they all end up at the same place, roughly? Some place in South America... must be Monarch Central. Then they all fly north, like Salmon I suppose... I don't get it. Why not stay down south where it's nice and warm... and bask in it. ;)
On the next topic... I don't know how old you are, not that old I think, but I do think it's time to spread those wings! Of course you must take us with you because you can't say goodbye to us! I've had enough of that for a while! :)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Thank you, susand3022. Yes, I'm definitely migrating.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Aiona--leaving and changing your life takes courage--good luck on becoming a butterfly--just believe in yourself and you'll come out stronger
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Another fine poem, Aiona--leaving and changing your life takes courage--good luck on becoming a butterfly--just believe in yourself and you'll come out stronger
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Mike
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
They are not the only ones that do that and I am always amazed at how nature takes care of its own, including us. Very well done for the contest. Excellent syllable count
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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They are not the only ones that do that and I am always amazed at how nature takes care of its own, including us. Very well done for the contest. Excellent syllable count
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Barb.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Aiona. I thought the flow was good and the message of the piece was good as well. I think the artwork really enhanced your words. Good job.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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This was a good read, Aiona. I thought the flow was good and the message of the piece was good as well. I think the artwork really enhanced your words. Good job.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thanks, 24chas!