NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Sherbet Rose"National Poetry Writing Month
12 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Alicia, being my favorite flower...
when the season is right...they are always in vases in my house...I love your beautiful poem...and your picture is stunning...very nicely written sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Hi Alicia, being my favorite flower...
when the season is right...they are always in vases in my house...I love your beautiful poem...and your picture is stunning...very nicely written sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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I like flowers and plants in general. It's always around me too. Thank you. God bless you :)
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I love them to...but my allergies keep me at distance with some...I thank God I'm good with Roses...or I would have to up my Benadyl...LOL...your so welcome Alicia...and have a wonderful weekend...smiling back at you...love xxoo
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks for introducing me to the Clogyrnach form with all of its rhymes. I liked the poem from the descriptive title to its bits of personification. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thanks for introducing me to the Clogyrnach form with all of its rhymes. I liked the poem from the descriptive title to its bits of personification. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Hi Joan! You're nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun poem about the beautiful sherbet rose that surely is a beauty and your picture choice is spot on to demonstrate the appearance of the beautiful rose.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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A very well-written fun poem about the beautiful sherbet rose that surely is a beauty and your picture choice is spot on to demonstrate the appearance of the beautiful rose.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Hi Sandra. I wouldn't mind of dozen of them flowers either. Thank you :)
Comment from Ross E Silke
This poem flows very well and is easy to read and understand unlike some of the poems I find listed. It's accurate and to the point. It paints a clear picture with lots of colours. The picture and imagery match well. I like the pink and the rose you selected. It blooms with much imagery and draws the reader in. Creative with originality. A great rose poem in its description of the Sherbet Rose. Best,
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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This poem flows very well and is easy to read and understand unlike some of the poems I find listed. It's accurate and to the point. It paints a clear picture with lots of colours. The picture and imagery match well. I like the pink and the rose you selected. It blooms with much imagery and draws the reader in. Creative with originality. A great rose poem in its description of the Sherbet Rose. Best,
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from 24chas
This was a great write, sunnilicious. I had never heard of that form before and it appears you did well with it. I loved the imagery you used, it really enhanced the picture. Good job.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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This was a great write, sunnilicious. I had never heard of that form before and it appears you did well with it. I loved the imagery you used, it really enhanced the picture. Good job.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
SIX STARS! (virtual) Oh, how I wish I had a sixer left for you for this sweet and unique write, Alicia. This poem is soOOO you! It starts out all sweet and delicate and then you pull no punches in your second stanza. Luv it!!
"Sexy without hips, thorns and whips, found a place" ... how very original!
Thinking outside of the box is your modus operandi, and you've done that justice here. Thanks for teaching me a new format 'Clogyrnach'.
Hugs,
Connie
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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SIX STARS! (virtual) Oh, how I wish I had a sixer left for you for this sweet and unique write, Alicia. This poem is soOOO you! It starts out all sweet and delicate and then you pull no punches in your second stanza. Luv it!!
"Sexy without hips, thorns and whips, found a place" ... how very original!
Thinking outside of the box is your modus operandi, and you've done that justice here. Thanks for teaching me a new format 'Clogyrnach'.
Hugs,
Connie
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Hi Connie. Don't feel gulity about the stars, I am a star. You're very nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Sunni,
Ooooh, this is an absolutely beautiful poem about this gorgeous rose! And the image you've selected to display works very well to complement your lovely verse. I really like the new form you are playing with here. You've created a great read, and I appreciate you sharing it with us. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Hi Sunni,
Ooooh, this is an absolutely beautiful poem about this gorgeous rose! And the image you've selected to display works very well to complement your lovely verse. I really like the new form you are playing with here. You've created a great read, and I appreciate you sharing it with us. Jan :-)
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from tfawcus
A Clogyrnach would have to be Welsh, wouldn't it! Actually rather a lovely form, which complements the gradual unfolding of this lovely rose. Beautifully described in your poem. What a great start to the April challenge.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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A Clogyrnach would have to be Welsh, wouldn't it! Actually rather a lovely form, which complements the gradual unfolding of this lovely rose. Beautifully described in your poem. What a great start to the April challenge.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Writers Digest has a List of 100 Poetic Forms. Thank you :)
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That'd keep me going for a while! LOL I wonder if Treischel knows of that website - he's always posting dirrent forms,
Comment from royowen
An excellent verse that looks like a lot of ability you have, I've actually never seen one of these before dear Alicia, rhymed in aabbba, well done My friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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An excellent verse that looks like a lot of ability you have, I've actually never seen one of these before dear Alicia, rhymed in aabbba, well done My friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you. God bless you :)
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You too Alicia
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Great imagery here in your words and of course roses have the power to soothe and stroke our senses, be romantic and sweeten our day, I just adore roses as much as you do, a fine write, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Great imagery here in your words and of course roses have the power to soothe and stroke our senses, be romantic and sweeten our day, I just adore roses as much as you do, a fine write, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)