Morning's Peaceful Panoply
Be sure to have a front-row seat...12 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
So artistically beautiful and eye appealing. I love the Nonet you have created ... every word an expression of the sounds, movement and feel of spring :))
This is a wonderful contest entry, and I wish you the very best :)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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So artistically beautiful and eye appealing. I love the Nonet you have created ... every word an expression of the sounds, movement and feel of spring :))
This is a wonderful contest entry, and I wish you the very best :)
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for dropping in on this one, Gale -- I do so appreciate your wonderful comments! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from miajaffri
I like your descriptions of sounds, delicate flutters and gentle chirps
blending with soft croaks in dawn's breezes. I also like the alliteration.
You have combined sounds, movement and soulful praise in the welcoming of spring.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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I like your descriptions of sounds, delicate flutters and gentle chirps
blending with soft croaks in dawn's breezes. I also like the alliteration.
You have combined sounds, movement and soulful praise in the welcoming of spring.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review, Mia! :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I love the image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery creates a vivid
word picture of Spring.
-I like the first two lines,
and the music imagery
later on in the poem.
-It is a very pleasant and
joyful poem; good luck
in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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-I love the image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery creates a vivid
word picture of Spring.
-I like the first two lines,
and the music imagery
later on in the poem.
-It is a very pleasant and
joyful poem; good luck
in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for those wonderful comments, Pam! :) :)
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Ross E Silke
Wow, this is so very beautiful! The images and the colour changing down the page as you read it is wonderful!--I've never seen changing colour chosen so delicately for separating the transitions. Excellent! It's truly beautiful and original. It looks like something one should print and display for others to read in their home or workplace. Marvelous! I like the idea of "hushed warmth" of Spring; it certainly talks a while for it to speak of true warmth as the earth gradually warms from the sun. I also like the diversity with the frogs croaking along with the birds chirping. The picture is colourful and pretty as well--amazing little birds in all their colourful plummage. Outstanding!! Best,
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Wow, this is so very beautiful! The images and the colour changing down the page as you read it is wonderful!--I've never seen changing colour chosen so delicately for separating the transitions. Excellent! It's truly beautiful and original. It looks like something one should print and display for others to read in their home or workplace. Marvelous! I like the idea of "hushed warmth" of Spring; it certainly talks a while for it to speak of true warmth as the earth gradually warms from the sun. I also like the diversity with the frogs croaking along with the birds chirping. The picture is colourful and pretty as well--amazing little birds in all their colourful plummage. Outstanding!! Best,
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for those wonderful comments, Ross! :) :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet poem about the early morning birds that start their songs before the sun rises on the horizon and put us in a wonderful mood for the early Spring morning.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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A very well-written Nonet poem about the early morning birds that start their songs before the sun rises on the horizon and put us in a wonderful mood for the early Spring morning.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for review, Sandra -- always appreciated! :) :)
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is a lovely, eloquently worded Nonet poem entry for the contest, Yvette.
Well composed, well penned and wonderfully well presented this should fare quite well in the contests outcome.
Good luck to you.
~Dean
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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This is a lovely, eloquently worded Nonet poem entry for the contest, Yvette.
Well composed, well penned and wonderfully well presented this should fare quite well in the contests outcome.
Good luck to you.
~Dean
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, Dean -- I appreciate your stopping by on this one.
Hope this finds you almost back to 100% -- been thinkin' boutcha! :) ;) Take care! :) ;)
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You're welcome, and thank you.
Comment from djsaxon
A lovely Nonet. Easy flow, true to form, and really evocative. fave line - Nature's mellow overture. The mother certainly has a way about her, the clever possum. DJ
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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A lovely Nonet. Easy flow, true to form, and really evocative. fave line - Nature's mellow overture. The mother certainly has a way about her, the clever possum. DJ
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, DJ. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine nonet, perfectly formed with sentiments of spring. I love your colour presentation which has plenty of warmth and grace and bird song, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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A fine nonet, perfectly formed with sentiments of spring. I love your colour presentation which has plenty of warmth and grace and bird song, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Dolly. :)
Comment from LisaMay
This is such a lovely poem, evoking the warmth of spring with its movement and song created by the birds and other creatures; I can almost hear the rustling and song notes in the branches.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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This is such a lovely poem, evoking the warmth of spring with its movement and song created by the birds and other creatures; I can almost hear the rustling and song notes in the branches.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Lisa May. :)
Comment from Candace Nola
Nice flow and beautiful imagery. Very expressive. Lovely verse to welcome spring. Really nice to read. Look forward to more of your work soon. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Nice flow and beautiful imagery. Very expressive. Lovely verse to welcome spring. Really nice to read. Look forward to more of your work soon. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Candace. :)
