After the Rain
Nonet8 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
A beautiful Nonet and contest entry! Love all the personification :)) This is a wonderful contest entry ... truly exquisite. A delightful read.
Best wishes!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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A beautiful Nonet and contest entry! Love all the personification :)) This is a wonderful contest entry ... truly exquisite. A delightful read.
Best wishes!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much!
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My pleasure :)
Comment from Ross E Silke
Wow, lots of great imagery and hope in this poem. A beautiful garden picture too!! The picture really caught my attention! All composed into a beautiful garden much the picture in your writing with wonderful descriptions of nature and the raindrops to oceans and tears, all so refreshing to read. It created a lovely shower in our forecast as a reader of poetry; you can feel the cool raindrops and the sounds of the ocean in this garden of images. Breathtaking and fun to reread over again! I like your metaphor of the sun coming out to drink the puddles and dry the trees tears; you can really picture that and it's quite ingenious! Genuine. Best,
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Wow, lots of great imagery and hope in this poem. A beautiful garden picture too!! The picture really caught my attention! All composed into a beautiful garden much the picture in your writing with wonderful descriptions of nature and the raindrops to oceans and tears, all so refreshing to read. It created a lovely shower in our forecast as a reader of poetry; you can feel the cool raindrops and the sounds of the ocean in this garden of images. Breathtaking and fun to reread over again! I like your metaphor of the sun coming out to drink the puddles and dry the trees tears; you can really picture that and it's quite ingenious! Genuine. Best,
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet poem about the refreshing feel of a beautiful garden after a sudden downpour after the sun dry the last puddle we can enjoy the scene once more.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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A very well-written Nonet poem about the refreshing feel of a beautiful garden after a sudden downpour after the sun dry the last puddle we can enjoy the scene once more.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, Anonymous Poet, this is just a lovely offering... and one need not even have a pic with your words... with the meandering and the sun sipping puddles, I've already got the image in my head!! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Oh, Anonymous Poet, this is just a lovely offering... and one need not even have a pic with your words... with the meandering and the sun sipping puddles, I've already got the image in my head!! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much, Yvette.
Comment from 24chas
This was really a beautiful piece of writing. I loved the flow of it and the imagery. I think the form was perfect for your words as well. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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This was really a beautiful piece of writing. I loved the flow of it and the imagery. I think the form was perfect for your words as well. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your nonet contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job on the syllable count per line. The picture is beautiful and a great choice to pair with your words. Those words tell a great little story. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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I enjoyed your nonet contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job on the syllable count per line. The picture is beautiful and a great choice to pair with your words. Those words tell a great little story. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much, Jan.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
This is a beautiful poem with an equally lovely visual effect, and a great contest entry. Nothing for me to suggest revising. Thanks and good luck. Jan
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
This is a beautiful poem with an equally lovely visual effect, and a great contest entry. Nothing for me to suggest revising. Thanks and good luck. Jan
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Cybertron1986
Such a vivid voice. Only a true creative and poetic eye can capture the personification of a "sun drinking puddles."
"Dry the arbor's tears" is what got me. It suggests how the sun is a guiding light to those who are lost.
Beautiful all around. A genuine infusion of both nature and human emotions.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Such a vivid voice. Only a true creative and poetic eye can capture the personification of a "sun drinking puddles."
"Dry the arbor's tears" is what got me. It suggests how the sun is a guiding light to those who are lost.
Beautiful all around. A genuine infusion of both nature and human emotions.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much!!! What a wonderful thing to say!
