Beloop the Dawn
Nonsense Poem6 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork for a nonsense poem.
-This is a good entry for the contest.
-There is a good flow to your poem,
and good use of nonsense words.
-Somehow it all goes together.
-The first two lines set the tone.
-I especially like "beloop the dawn"
and "the waffin world will wistly rouse."
-The ending is good, too, as they
"snork with joy."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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-Good artwork for a nonsense poem.
-This is a good entry for the contest.
-There is a good flow to your poem,
and good use of nonsense words.
-Somehow it all goes together.
-The first two lines set the tone.
-I especially like "beloop the dawn"
and "the waffin world will wistly rouse."
-The ending is good, too, as they
"snork with joy."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much for the kind review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from diamondbogle
Yo this was really cool. I like the way this was written. It had imagery but yet I kinda went off with it. I also liked how it flowed really nicely. Overall really well done.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Yo this was really cool. I like the way this was written. It had imagery but yet I kinda went off with it. I also liked how it flowed really nicely. Overall really well done.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the kind words - even the Yo!
Comment from 24chas
I enjoyed this read. I liked the way it flowed with the nonsense words and it made me snork when I read it. The rhyme scheme helped make it a smooth read. Nice job.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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I enjoyed this read. I liked the way it flowed with the nonsense words and it made me snork when I read it. The rhyme scheme helped make it a smooth read. Nice job.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you. I often snork when reading poetry. Not always with joy!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hilarious!! :) ;) And very rhythmic to help us really enjoy your nonsense verses! :) ;) A great one that ends up being just a dream...darn! :) ;) LOL! :) Best of luck at the polls! :)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Hilarious!! :) ;) And very rhythmic to help us really enjoy your nonsense verses! :) ;) A great one that ends up being just a dream...darn! :) ;) LOL! :) Best of luck at the polls! :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you! Some of my dreams really are like this!
Comment from Cybertron1986
I like the uniqueness expressed here. It captured a rhythmic appeal which was supplemented with a feel for an entertaining tongue twister. The "meaning" of the words was a delight to figure out. Well done
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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I like the uniqueness expressed here. It captured a rhythmic appeal which was supplemented with a feel for an entertaining tongue twister. The "meaning" of the words was a delight to figure out. Well done
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed this bit of nonsense.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Ha ha ha! This is a really good nonsense poem and a great contest entry which should fare quite well. Nothing to revise. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Ha ha ha! This is a really good nonsense poem and a great contest entry which should fare quite well. Nothing to revise. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Ja,. Glad you enjoyed.
