Comment from moongirlwriter

Excellent

Well. . .that COULD happen maybe. . .but then because of all the caffeine, they could be brown with all those dark roasted grounds. Ha ha
Cute two line. :)

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thank you for your review. I guess it COULD happen.

reply by moongirlwriter on 05-Apr-2019

:)

Comment from LG Wolfe

Excellent

Yup, mine will, and I don't care. Love your alliteration and assonance in this funny two-liner. It was a thoroughly enjoyable perk for me this morning.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

Comment from diamondbogle

Excellent

To answer your question, yes. They will. I cannot live without coffee. haha its my life line. This was a cute little diddy and I think its going to do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019

Thank you for your review.

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

Some of us can't do without, at the very least, that morning cup of coffee. I don't know about gills turning green but the mood can become black. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019

Thank you for your review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I never drink it and I don't have green gills, he he he, you made me smile here, some can't function for the day without their morning fix of coffee, my husband was one of those! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019

Thank you for your review.